Jayne: Yeah, that was some pretty risky sittin' you did there. Wash: That's right, of course, 'cause they wouldn't arrest me if we got boarded, I'm just the pilot. I can always say I was flying the ship by accident.

'Serenity'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Laga - Jun 02, 2008 10:27:17 am PDT #202 of 6681
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

here's one for #6. Other than being 100 words I don't think it's a true drabble since I think you can see the twist ending coming.

We tried not to hang around Dad at the summer place. We were embarrassed of his little swim trunks and the board he never learned how to ride. Mom spent most of her time chatting with the other moms. Dad tended to hang around with Uncle Henry. He never married; he was such the gentleman, and a gentle man. Back from the beach he’d help Mom in the kitchen or take me out on the porch to trim my unruly bangs. Looking back now, I can’t believe it never occurred to me he and Dad were more than just friends.


Laga - Jun 02, 2008 10:28:56 am PDT #203 of 6681
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

good one Wolfram. Thanks for the goosebumps.


SailAweigh - Jun 02, 2008 10:32:35 am PDT #204 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Excellent, Wolfram. That gave me the creeps quite nicely.

Laga, I like yours, too. I'm always looking for a reason to bring the hoyay to photos like that.


Wolfram - Jun 02, 2008 10:34:33 am PDT #205 of 6681
Visilurking

Thanks. I liked yours too, Laga, and laughed right into the second sentence.

Of course, I dare anyone to say "Dad's little swim trunks" without smiling. Comedy gold.


Laga - Jun 02, 2008 10:37:31 am PDT #206 of 6681
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

thanks, Sail. I decided to click on picture #6 sight unseen and write the first thing that popped in my head. If you knew me, you wouldn't be surprised it was hoyay... actually now that I think about it my first thought was of kids who are embarassed by their Dad. The hoyay crept in after I started typing.


Wolfram - Jun 02, 2008 11:17:44 am PDT #207 of 6681
Visilurking

Last one for today. Photo Ten.

Return

I was downright terrified. And Emily - well obviously this was when she was still talking to me, a million years before the Milwaukee incident but that's another story - so Emily clutched my hand and told me not to be scared, and that she was gonna look after me forever.

Funny how I remember little details. It was damn sunny, and behind me that weird girl Polly was singing made-up stuff like always - Polly died in a fire the following year, poor girl - and suddenly, he was there. And he was crying.

Emily, always the braver one, spoke first. “Dad?”


Laga - Jun 02, 2008 11:26:08 am PDT #208 of 6681
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

you're making my allergies act up, Wolfram.


SailAweigh - Jun 02, 2008 5:29:06 pm PDT #209 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Photo two.

Home Improvement

She perused the book carefully. This one looked strong. Heavily muscled legs, good if the horse pulled a tendon and couldn't be hitched to the plow. Good strong arms, he would wield a powerful axe. No fear of running short of firewood. From Aberdeen, a Scot? Thrift would be required if the annual payment on the farm was to be made in time. The face, though comely, didn't tell her much. Would he be a kind father to her children? Would she have to wear long sleeves, again, even in the summer?

There were more pictures. She turned the page.


Laga - Jun 03, 2008 7:29:25 am PDT #210 of 6681
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

Ooh I like it, Sail.


Wolfram - Jun 03, 2008 9:25:31 am PDT #211 of 6681
Visilurking

Me too. Nice one, Sail.