Could he spit, click his teeth, slam his hand down on something? (how annoyed is he?)
I can hurt a demon!! That's right. I'm back. And I'm a BLOODY ANIMAL!
Spike ,'Showtime'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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erikaj - Aug 12, 2009 7:19:57 am PDT #1993 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!
Gudanov - Aug 12, 2009 7:30:54 am PDT #1994 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Slamming something is a good beat. There's nothing for him to slam, but doing something with excess force would probably work. He's fairly annoyed, it's a turf dispute between two different organizations on the same side.
Allyson - Aug 12, 2009 9:36:18 am PDT #1995 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
I'm starting to feel much better about doing the book alone. Relieved, actually. It's a lot of work, but it's mine, and I like depending on me, even if it means if it fails to find a publisher, it's all me.
Gudanov - Aug 12, 2009 10:05:57 am PDT #1996 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
I'm starting to feel much better about doing the book alone.
I think it will be a better book for it too.
Gudanov - Aug 13, 2009 5:30:15 am PDT #1997 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
I revised chapter 1 again and I'm starting to really feel good about it. It feels tight.
Gudanov - Aug 13, 2009 5:54:54 am PDT #1998 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
I also added this current revision to my 'Evolution of Chapter 1' blog page for those ones of people interested in seeing the process of going from rough draft to final revision (not there yet).
And yes, my mom left a comment.
Burrell - Aug 13, 2009 8:43:03 pm PDT #1999 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
I had a major a ha! today about my story and what was wrong with it. I think I may be able to fix it and finish it by Christmas.
Beverly - Aug 13, 2009 11:18:59 pm PDT #2000 of 6690
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Yay, Burrell!
And go you, Gud!
Barb - Aug 14, 2009 4:37:19 am PDT #2001 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”
Yay, Burrell and woo hoooooo Gud!
I'm still all preeny-like over the great email from Agent of Awesomeness.
Gudanov - Aug 14, 2009 5:13:44 am PDT #2002 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping
Go Burrell!
That sounds good Barb preen away!
I'm in revised chapter 9 and it is proving tough. I know I need to do some cutting, but cutting out the stuff I can lose and stitching together the stuff that's important is turning out to not be easy. Chapter 8 was so much easier by comparison.
I'm entering a tough part of the draft in general. I knew there needs to be a lot of cutting in the next 3-4 chapters of the rough draft. Once I get to the middle of the draft, it should get easier since a LOT happens in the middle. The middle is my favorite part of the draft.