But the appropriate response to a massive rewrite is never "(Agent Kate) is just one opinion, why do we have to make changes?"

Oh, educating someone on the basics of publishing is never fun. But you know, she's your agent, not his. Kate's not going to send it out unless it she's happy with it. So he can stick to his righteous guns and have a manuscript that sits and gathers dust or he can put on his big boy panties and understand that publishing isn't easy or fair and it most assuredly doesn't cater to tender feelings and whimsies.

Not that I have strong feelings on the subject or anything.

I'm a greedy backstabber who would never have gotten this far without him.

Um. I. Uh. He knows you already had, like, an agent and a published book before you started working with him, right?

Also, I find it interesting that those are almost the exact same words my ex-writing partner used with me.

It sounds like he just wants to take credit without putting in the work. I'm new to this but I'm finding out that to a great extent pumping out that initial text is the easy part because just telling a story can be fun, rolling up your sleeves and doing the rewrite is the work.

It's like software, something I do know about, there's a lot of really crappy software out there because getting it 80% done is fun since you are making it work. It's the 20% of making it work really well that is a lot of sweat that isn't very fun. But it's the difference between software that you can barely give away and software people are willing to buy.

He knows you already had, like, an agent and a published book before you started working with him, right?

My thoughts exactly. I am playing the world's smallest violin for him.

He knows you already had, like, an agent and a published book before you started working with him, right?

Exactly. Allyson, I am so sorry the conversation went badly. But it sounds like he had a fantasy of what Being A Writer was like, and is lashing out because reality didn't match that.

Would you like me to answer that question? Seriously, I'm making the offer. He doesn't have to like me, and I can be completely honest and tell him why. I'll do it, just say the word.

Was it that bad? I think my own low self-esteem about my writing kind of blinds me, sometimes. I know that tonally, it wasn't working. I just have to trust Kate on it, and do the work she is recommending. Her notes sound correct to me. Pull out the slapstick looney tunes and bring Sam back into the real world. That sounds right.

Yeah, trust Agent Kate. And trust yourself.

I'm sorry the conversation went badly, but it's good that you had it. You can both move forward now.

It sounds like you're doing the right thing Allyson.

Busy yesterday, so not much progress book-wise. However, I made more progress than I thought because I was able to lift a fair amount from my rough draft. I knew that thing would be good for something.

It looks like I have 130 quotes culled from the rough draft for my blog. That will keep me set for a good long time. It looks like about half come from one character which isn't really a surprise.