Yee haw! Chapter 5 of the revision is finally done, you know, for this revision. I went back and rewrote a good deal of chapter 4, but it is for the best. I cannot wait to get done with the revision of 6 and finally start getting on with the plot. At the end of chapter 6 I will be at the end of chapter 2 in the rough draft. What took 16,000 words will now be done in 11,000 words (approx.) with an entirely new chapter that didn't exist in the rough draft.
Friday morning I was in a "This is utter crap!" frame of thought. Now I'm back in a "Hey, this might actually be good." frame of thought.
Friday morning I was in a "This is utter crap!" frame of thought. Now I'm back in a "Hey, this might actually be good." frame of thought.
Every writer's lament. ;-)
Revised chapter 6 is turning into a pain. I have a bit of character interaction and some information to convey. I've done that and I've done it with a fraction of the words that the rough draft used. But I still can't get past that feeling that nothing really happens in the chapter.
There are some words burned on physically getting from point A to point B, maybe I can summarize those down to a sentence, kill the dialogue associated with it and move my chapter end point further back.
I really liked the current chapter end point, but if I cut any more out of it, this short chapter will be too short without a good reason for being so. It's already coming off a very short one scene chapter. Maybe I'll go for a longer chapter and stretch out to another place that would be good.
I finished revised chapter 6 . . . and fail. I had to dump the whole thing. Try again tonight.
I hate when that happens.
I should be able to look at the last bit you sent me tonight, and get back to you. Sorry for the late.
No need to be sorry.
I'm going to cut most of what was in six and move the parts I need into other places. The good part of this is that I'm going to reconnect to my rough draft very soon now. The first 16,000 words of the rough draft pretty much got thrown away.
I am not a hack. I can finish this book. I am not a hack. I can finish this book.
Oh dear. I think I am broken.
Allyson is not a hack. She can finish this book.
