Everyone has good news!

::tosses confetti::

Oh, and Gudanov, when you are ready for beta readers, consider me volunteered. i can't offer any kind of expertise in the way of feedback, but I have read a fair amount of fantasy and tend to have opinions.

Marking it down for that magic day when I have enough revision done. Thanks!

Yeah, I am volunteering. You're writing in my happy genre, and I read like the wind, so lots of pages is not a problem.

Anyway, you should ask when you need it. We'll feel free to tell you no! Hee.

Noted. Thanks!

The revised chapter 1 is done. The first revision of it anyways. I still have at least one more run though it for more detailed corrections. I've decided to get the story changes down before running through and fixing the punctuation, checking the grammar, and punching up the language. The first few and last few chapters will probably get revisited the most.

I just scratched the surface of two last night. I'm hoping to make some more serious progress tonight. After that, will come a brand spanking new chapter that wasn't in the rough draft.

So, I did that thing where you think about your idea and try to write down everything it makes you think of and stuff..I didn't get anything out of it. Besides feeling kind of nuts. Which I knew already.

Lots of writing exercises make me feel kind of nuts, like "If I have time to do this odd exercise, surely I have time to write something that I'm not going to stare at in bafflement."

Yes, this. I thought it would help, but...

I think with writing exercises, it's a good idea to try a bunch of them, and only keep using the ones which actually work. take creatign characters. Some writers can write great dialogue but have trouble with a cohesive backstyory and would beneifit from writing detailed bios of characters. Some writers can create worlds and bios till the cows come home, but the voices of all their characters sound very similar, and and an exercise like describing the same event in the first person voices of three different characters can help with that. They're just tools after all.

No forward progress last night. I didn't have much time and I went back into chapter 1 to clean a few things up. For one, I can't believe how many times I messed up it's and its. I understand why I make the mistake, typing 's is just reflexive when doing a possessive. But, wow, I just don't see them when I read over unless I'm very careful. That's going to be tough, I mentally fix things when I read and don't catch mistakes easily.

My wife also gave me some good tips from some of her research. Be on the watch for sentences that use 'was' since they can typically be written stronger. Also, and I already sort of knew this but got lazy a couple of times, be on the watch for when I tell what emotion a character is experiencing.

The chapter 2 revision is going to be a tough one. There is a lot of information to convey about the setting and backstory. The backstory I think I can break up a bit and push back parts to be conveyed in smaller chunks over time. The setting is tougher, I need to find a balance between excessive narrative and still getting enough across to give the reader a mental image.