Jayne: What're you gonna tell the others? Mal: About what? Jayne: About why I'm dead. Mal: Hadn't thought about it. Jayne: Make something up. Don't tell 'em what I did.

'Ariel'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Lee - May 22, 2008 10:25:02 am PDT #170 of 6681
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

Nice one, Wolfram.


Wolfram - May 22, 2008 10:26:59 am PDT #171 of 6681
Visilurking

Thanks. These are fun.


Ailleann - May 22, 2008 10:29:59 am PDT #172 of 6681
vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda

Completely off the cuff, and man is 100 words small today.

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She adjusts the tablecloth, waits for a knock. Mr. Greaves is on his way, always here at half three like clockwork.

A quick glance in the mirror, final preparation. Her hair loose, a little kohl at the corners of her eyes. The Greek-like tunic isn’t terribly authentic, but no one notices. Maybe next she could try soothsaying. People like variety, after all.

Tap tap, and she schools her face to a droop-eyed look of languor before turning the knob. Greaves is waiting, anxious to “speak” with his wife. She feels a fleeting pang of guilt before she invites him in.


Lee - May 22, 2008 10:32:23 am PDT #173 of 6681
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

Nice!

I was wondering if anyone would use that meaning.


Amy - May 22, 2008 10:33:52 am PDT #174 of 6681
Because books.

Hey! I was going to do a "medium" medium!

That's awesome, Ailleann. The tone is so perfect.


SailAweigh - May 22, 2008 10:37:56 am PDT #175 of 6681
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

Beat me to it, too, Ailleann. Although I had one I thought might put a nice twist on it. We'll see if I take the time to actually put it down on paper to see if it works.


Ailleann - May 22, 2008 10:42:47 am PDT #176 of 6681
vanguard of the socialist Hollywood liberal homosexualist agenda

Go for it, Sail! You too Amy!


Typo Boy - May 22, 2008 10:50:42 am PDT #177 of 6681
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

Good ones. I have a (not on-topic) Dr Who/Endless drabble in Fanfic. Typo Boy "Fan Fiction II: Great story! Where's the sequel?" May 22, 2008 7:57:23 am PDT


Miracleman - May 22, 2008 10:51:46 am PDT #178 of 6681
No, I don't think I will - me, quoting Captain Steve Rogers, to all of 2020

“It won’t work this way.”
“Why not, it…why not?”
“This is…I don’t know, the idea, it’s not visual, maybe…?”
“Okay, but, …what, are you gonna write it longhand, or…?"
“No…I don’t know, I can’t see it.”
“So…but the guy wants this …I mean, you know, we work in visuals…”
"You work in visuals. I work in ideas.”
“Oh, nice, very pretentious. But until you can communicate your ideas to an audience telepathically…”
“…heh, maybe by osmosis…”
“Shut up and…you need a pen?”
“Yeah, just…maybe a rock album?”
“…seriously?”
“Stupid?”
“Put down the beer. Get out.”


Typo Boy - May 22, 2008 10:52:56 am PDT #179 of 6681
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.

heh.