Strong like an Amazon.

Tara ,'Storyteller'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Barb - May 05, 2009 10:47:51 am PDT #1541 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

Amy's style makes me twitch just thinking about it but her end results are so great, it just serves as a wonderful example of what works for the individual writer.

Me, I'm also seat of the pants, but I'm very, very linear-- I have to write beginning to end. And I'm probably not so much seat of the pants, even because I've thought the story through so thoroughly, it's like I have it outlined in my head.

Usually, I'll write about 5-6 chapters, then as things start coalescing, I'll stop to write a chapter to chapter outline, if only so I don't forget certain tidbits I want to add in later.


Amy - May 05, 2009 11:00:38 am PDT #1542 of 6690
Because books.

I do make notes, just to clarify. Weird notes, sort of thought bubbles, about scenes or plot points, and like Barb that happens as I get closer to understanding where the story is going.

One thing I always have to do is go back and make sure I didn't lost the thread, especially in a romance -- see that the heroine still wants what she wanted in the beginning, or that certain conflicts got resolved.

It's all very messy and vague, but it usually works for me. I have learned that I do need a first draft I can then go over and tweak.

But I have writer friends who make, no kidding, color-coded charts, notecards, chapter-by-chapter, scene-by-scene outlines, character worksheets, the whole nine. That just ... baffles me. I like to brainstorm just with some ideas, sort of telling the initial story to myself, but that's about it.

And thank you, Barb. ::blushes::


Barb - May 05, 2009 11:04:23 am PDT #1543 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

But I have writer friends who make, no kidding, color-coded charts, notecards, chapter-by-chapter, scene-by-scene outlines, character worksheets, the whole nine.

::shudders::


Gudanov - May 05, 2009 11:10:29 am PDT #1544 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I had to plan my next chapter since it involves a heist. I needed to know where everything is. Then, I needed to make the character's plan. Then, I needed to figure out everything that goes wrong. Finally, I had to figure out how they get out of it. I have diagrams.

The previous couple of chapters, no outline at all. Just a destination point.


Connie Neil - May 05, 2009 11:41:49 am PDT #1545 of 6690
brillig

In battle scenes and such, I use an Excel spreadsheet to keep track of all the parties and where they have to be when.


erikaj - May 05, 2009 1:08:07 pm PDT #1546 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

I'm too LD for that, but that's why one action sequence has made me all "Are we *really*, truly, sure about the writer thing? Because I'm sure you could find something else..." And I was about to, too, but "Just when I thought I was out, they pulled me back in." But this is the closest I've ever come to walking away. So to speak. But, you know, I admit it. I still want to write the next Big Fat Greek Bitch(/Ari) and get paid. Or something like that.(Although it's sad that that was in the first Entourage I ever saw back in'04 and I forgot about it, thereby forgetting why I think of one of my favorite '00s rom coms as My Big Fat Greek Bitch. Sorry, Ms. Vardalos...it's nothing personal.)


Gudanov - May 06, 2009 3:48:07 am PDT #1547 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I got in about 1000 words on chapter 8 last night. If I get even a little bit of writing time tonight I should go over 50,000 words. About 1/4 of the way there now.


Gudanov - May 06, 2009 8:04:50 am PDT #1548 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

1000 words in I can see that chapter 8 will probably actually be 8 and 9. There's just too many things to stuff in there and I expect to go through a lot of words doing the heist.


Gudanov - May 07, 2009 5:37:04 am PDT #1549 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

A paltry 600 words or so last night. But I didn't have much time to work on it, about 50 minutes. I thought of some good tweaks while commuting though. A scene I decided to cut due to irrelevance I'm going to put back in and it will be quite relevant.


Gudanov - May 08, 2009 4:52:02 am PDT #1550 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

About 1200 words last night. I'm hoping to finish off the 8th chapter this weekend and maybe get a good start on the 9th. I got in my scene that will foreshadow something that will happen at the very end of the story. Tonight maybe I will get in a brand new scene I thought up that will add a little more action to chapter 8 and a bit of insight into a character that hasn't been really well developed yet. I'm feeling good about 8 so far.