Hey, if it means I don't have to read any more, woo and, might I add, a big hoo.

Xander ,'Sleeper'


The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Gudanov - Mar 31, 2009 10:08:16 am PDT #1329 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I'll be the contrarian again and say that if something is annoying you like a rock in your shoe as you move along, go ahead and fix it. If you're a third of the way through and you realize an action in the first 10 pages has been completely negated or you've thought up something to put in the first 10 pages that will make something later on even better, go ahead and put it in/take it out.

I don't think that is totally contrary. I've stepped back and fixed things that are just wrong. But I'm not going back and rewriting a paragraph or conversation until it sounds right to me.


Gudanov - Apr 01, 2009 9:10:45 am PDT #1330 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

I finished the detailed outline for chapter 2 last night, so I'm ready to conquer chapter 2. The detailed outlining starts getting harder after this. I have parallel plot threads going on at that point, though the story only follows one thread.


Barb - Apr 01, 2009 9:14:04 am PDT #1331 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”

I split the difference on the revise as you go. I say keep writing, but it doesn't hurt to give each previous chapter a once over before you start on the next. Provided you don't get caught up in revising it to death.

Which... I know. Easier said than done.


Atropa - Apr 01, 2009 12:12:56 pm PDT #1332 of 6690
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.

Look! Look! Book cover! [link]


JZ - Apr 01, 2009 12:14:17 pm PDT #1333 of 6690
See? I gave everybody here an opportunity to tell me what a bad person I am and nobody did, because I fuckin' rule.

Oh, so pretty!


Gudanov - Apr 01, 2009 12:14:29 pm PDT #1334 of 6690
Coding and Sleeping

That's awesome!


erikaj - Apr 01, 2009 12:22:10 pm PDT #1335 of 6690
Always Anti-fascist!

Great, Jilli!


Laga - Apr 01, 2009 1:13:56 pm PDT #1336 of 6690
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.

squee!

...am I looking at it funny or is the L in "Charm School" capitalized?


Connie Neil - Apr 01, 2009 2:20:31 pm PDT #1337 of 6690
brillig

The little figure always looks like she's bent over to me.


§ ita § - Apr 01, 2009 2:24:09 pm PDT #1338 of 6690
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

...am I looking at it funny or is the L in "Charm School" capitalized?

I think you're looking at it funny.

Jilli, that's so cool and real!