because of his insistence that the dialogue be spoken as conversationally as possible
The scene between Harry and Kate in
Henry V
is even funnier than I could believe, I had to look it up to make sure the lines were as said, especially the "Here comes your father" right after they kiss.
Thanks for the feedback, y'all. Those lines did scan a little bulky to me.
My copy-edited manuscript arrived on the doorstep today.
This is no reason to freak out, I know.
Does that knowledge stop me from freaking out a bit? Ha.
Just keep in mind, Jilli, the copy editor is generally not your actual editor and that the power of STET is yours.
Especially if the C.E. is being a noodge.
I lucked out. My copy editor is awesome. I'm doing the second pass on the copy edits today, and then the manuscript gets mailed back.
In other JilliBook news, my editor let me know that the publisher and editorial director read the manuscript and are really pleased with it! But they're worried that the current cover design isn't elegant and gothy
enough,
so they want the art department to come up with some more designs. The current design is the standard Lady of the Manners portrait in black, white, and red, on a black background (matte, with gloss black pinstripes).
I'm assuming the publisher and editorial director reading and being pleased with the manuscript is kind of a big deal, yes?
I'm assuming the publisher and editorial director reading and being pleased with the manuscript is kind of a big deal, yes?
I'd whimper in jealousy if it was almost anyone else. As it is, I'm super pleased for you.
I had no idea that the publisher and editorial director were ever handed manuscripts to read. So when Emily the Awesome Editor sent me that mail, I kinda stared at it in open-mouthed bogglement.
Jilli, I fully expect you to be invited to talkshows, because Goths are hip, they're happening, they're now, and you look so wonderful.
I had no idea that the publisher and editorial director were ever handed manuscripts to read.
Well... it's how my book wound up canceled. My (very baby) editor and her immediate supervising editor both loved it. They gave it to the publisher, who hated it.
So trust me, love. This is a Very, Very Good Thing.