( continues...) They were bawling and sniffling and so was I. And when the Raptoress came in, I just held my hands up. “I surrender,” I told her. “Call the Feds. I want to rehab.”
Who was the real power? The Captain? or Tenille?
Xander ,'Showtime'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
Miracleman - Nov 21, 2008 11:28:46 am PST #1198 of 6690
No, I don't think I will - me, quoting Captain Steve Rogers, to all of 2020
Amy - Nov 21, 2008 11:30:28 am PST #1199 of 6690
Because books.
Just one little thing to consider -- It's really hard to read something that long here, especially because it loses formatting, and looks like there are no paragraph breaks.
Miracleman - Nov 21, 2008 11:37:54 am PST #1200 of 6690
No, I don't think I will - me, quoting Captain Steve Rogers, to all of 2020
Okay, I'll stop.
Amy - Nov 21, 2008 11:41:07 am PST #1201 of 6690
Because books.
You don't have to stop -- that's not what I said. But if you could format it so it reads like regular text, and maybe post shorter bits in separate chunks, it would help. Me, anyway.
Beverly - Nov 21, 2008 11:42:05 am PST #1202 of 6690
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
No, silly, don't stop. Email it as a doc to those you want to read it. Better yet, put it up as a locked entry in your LJ and create a filter for readers.
If you format it as a text document, or a manuscript, it will be easier to A. read, and B. sell.
Miracleman - Nov 21, 2008 11:45:29 am PST #1203 of 6690
No, I don't think I will - me, quoting Captain Steve Rogers, to all of 2020
I didn't mean I'd stop writing, I meant I'd stop posting like that.
I'll work something out. But for now...the weekend!
Anne W. - Nov 21, 2008 3:35:45 pm PST #1204 of 6690
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
I'm hooked. Very hooked. I absolutely would want to read more.
Beverly - Nov 21, 2008 3:42:40 pm PST #1205 of 6690
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Oh me too! I've always wanted somebody to put comics in text so I could read them. I have a problem reading graphic novels and comics, but text would be awesome.
Typo Boy - Nov 21, 2008 4:27:22 pm PST #1206 of 6690
Calli: My people have a saying. A man who trusts can never be betrayed, only mistaken.Avon: Life expectancy among your people must be extremely short.
MM very hooked. I'd totally buy something that started like this. Unlike some of the earlier posters this IS the kind of thing I like, a first rate example besides. But yeah, this board is not the right form. Can I be a beta for this? PleasePleasePlease.
On Edit: When I say not right form, I just mean reading novel length work in posts would drive me nuts. Though I guess you argue, that is a putt rather than a drive.
Laga - Nov 21, 2008 6:54:05 pm PST #1207 of 6690
You should know I'm a big deal in the Resistance.
I read the first paragraph and said, "yes! I would buy this!"