Got notes on Sam from Agent Kate. Major rewrite.
Hold me.
Inara: We thought we lost you. Mal: Well, I've been right here.
'Out Of Gas'
The Great Write Way, Act Three: Where's the gun?
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Allyson - Nov 14, 2008 4:29:11 pm PST #1116 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
Burrell - Nov 14, 2008 4:39:31 pm PST #1117 of 6690
Why did Darth Vader cross the road? To get to the Dark Side!
You can do it, Allyson. But yes, virtual hugs for you in abundance.
Connie Neil - Nov 14, 2008 5:56:27 pm PST #1118 of 6690
brillig
everyone's okay with taking a hiatus with the drabbles
works for me
SailAweigh - Nov 14, 2008 5:57:07 pm PST #1119 of 6690
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb
Perkins, I think we're all a little burned out for the nonce; I sure am, I know. We do seem to go through cycles in here, don't we?
Amy - Nov 14, 2008 5:59:17 pm PST #1120 of 6690
Because books.
Yeah, I'm okay with it, Perkins. I haven't even been drabbling when I choose the challenge.
You can do it, Allyson. There aren't many books written that are perfect right out of the gate. Take a deep breath, read over her suggestions, and talk to her about them if you have questions.
Atropa - Nov 14, 2008 7:09:10 pm PST #1121 of 6690
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.
You can do it, Allyson. I have faith in you and Sam.
Barb - Nov 15, 2008 7:02:03 am PST #1122 of 6690
“Not dead yet!”
Yeah, Perkins-- I know I've been a total loser about drabbling because I've been so sunk into trying to get my ass back in gear on the longer stuff.
Allyson - Nov 15, 2008 3:16:30 pm PST #1123 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
I keep going over the notes, which include a change in plot and narration, which is pretty much like writing an entirely new book.
I'm just not a fiction writer. I honestly can't imagine rewriting this whole book with a new plot. I'd rather get a spork in my eye.
dcp - Nov 15, 2008 3:25:21 pm PST #1124 of 6690
The more I learn, the more I realize how little I know.
Think of it as a sequel?
Allyson - Nov 15, 2008 3:27:56 pm PST #1125 of 6690
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica
heh. NO.
It's just a ton of work that I'll have to do. I wrote 7 out of the 10 chapters, and edited the 3 I didn't write. And then I'll end up splitting a $2500 advance (if any) with the other writer, and I'll be miserable after four months of work.