Design through a middle man is probably not a very good idea, generally.
FWIW, I like your original a lot better. In addition to being not very logoy, the other two kind of have people faces, which is disturbing.
Murk: But you're a God! The Sacred Glorificus! Glory: I'm a God in exile. Far from the Hellfires of Home and sharing my body with an enemy that stabs my boys in their fleshy little stomachs!
'Dirty Girls'
Spike's Bitches 39: Cuppa Tea, Cuppa Tea, Almost Got Shagged, Cuppa Tea...
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brenda m - Jan 25, 2008 11:06:36 am PST #3992 of 10001
If you're going through hell/keep on going/don't slow down/keep your fear from showing/you might be gone/'fore the devil even knows you're there
Sophia Brooks - Jan 25, 2008 11:07:52 am PST #3993 of 10001
Cats to become a rabbit should gather immediately now here
FWIW, I like your original a lot better. In addition to being not very logoy, the other two kind of have people faces, which is disturbing.
I agree with brenda. Also, the new ones are very long and kind of off-putting and yours is round and welcoming.
omnis_audis - Jan 25, 2008 11:20:29 am PST #3994 of 10001
omnis, pursue. That's an order from a shy woman who can use M-16. - Shir
Doc said I'm free. Now I get to see how long the red tape will take before I breathe "fresh" SoCal air!!!
Emily - Jan 25, 2008 11:24:25 am PST #3995 of 10001
"In the equation E = mc⬧, c⬧ is a pretty big honking number." - Scola
In addition to being not very logoy, the other two kind of have people faces, which is disturbing.
Me three. Yours has the round-puppy-head kind of cuteness, and the artist's has the long-adult-head... notness. Silly.
beekaytee - Jan 25, 2008 11:31:13 am PST #3996 of 10001
Compassionately intolerant
that's the point. And, honestly, it's probably your friend's doing for not communicating that properly.
I have a feeling she didn't say, take what we have here and make it better. She's wonderful for wanting my stuff to be more professional and, in the end, for me to be more successful. But her idea of professional is pretty stark.
the other two kind of have people faces, which is disturbing.My first take on the first sketch was 'huh, Cindy Brady...on acid.'
round and welcoming.
In addition to being not very logoy, the other two kind of have people faces, which is disturbing.
Me three. Yours has the round-puppy-head kind of cuteness, and the artist's has the long-adult-head... notness. Silly.
See? You all get it. That is exactly what I was going for with the roundness. Welcoming!
Well, that feels better. Thanks. Now I think I can say 'no thanks' without feeling ungrateful.
Much obliged. Very much obliged.
DCJensen - Jan 25, 2008 11:37:41 am PST #3997 of 10001
All is well that ends in pizza.
Gah! Absolut guy still doggedly insisting if I don't pay towing and turn over vehicle, he will submit storage and towing to collections after 30 days.
Now Junkyard owner wants me to go to someone and talk to him to convince me Absolut guy is full of it.
t headdesk I was going to nap this afternoon.
Ginger - Jan 25, 2008 11:46:01 am PST #3998 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
Yay askye!
sumi - Jan 25, 2008 11:47:01 am PST #3999 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!
Woo hoo askye!
vw bug - Jan 25, 2008 11:47:07 am PST #4000 of 10001
Mostly lurking...
askye, that's wonderful news! YAY!
Pix - Jan 25, 2008 11:47:35 am PST #4001 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.
WOOT! Askye, that's fantastic! Congrats!