five, seven, then five
syllables mark a haiku,
remarkable oaf
Jayne, your mouth is talking. You might wanna look to that.
Mal ,'Serenity'
Spike's Bitches 38: Well, This Is Just...Neat.
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Polter-Cow - Dec 21, 2007 12:46:35 pm PST #9483 of 10002
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
omnis_audis - Dec 21, 2007 12:47:17 pm PST #9484 of 10002
omnis, pursue. That's an order from a shy woman who can use M-16. - Shir
OK, here it is. I'm not much of a poet, so you English teacher/poetry/literary folks, feel free to offer constructive criticism.
bed room air is cold
under the covers is warm and cozy
Oops. late for work again
Ginger - Dec 21, 2007 12:48:01 pm PST #9485 of 10002
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
Haiku are easy
Five, seven, five syllables
A twist at the end
Polter-Cow - Dec 21, 2007 12:49:15 pm PST #9486 of 10002
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
under the covers is warm and cozy
That's three too many syllables there, bub.
Ginger - Dec 21, 2007 12:54:29 pm PST #9487 of 10002
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
Bedroom air is cold
Under covers I am warm
Late for work again
Glamcookie - Dec 21, 2007 12:54:48 pm PST #9488 of 10002
I know my own heart and understand my fellow man. But I am made unlike anyone I have ever met. I dare to say I am like no one in the whole world. - Anne Lister
dreaded cow-workers
will keep me in the office
so I must beat them
omnis_audis - Dec 21, 2007 1:06:50 pm PST #9489 of 10002
omnis, pursue. That's an order from a shy woman who can use M-16. - Shir
That's three too many syllables there, bub.damn syllables/words thing. Pfft. I'm sitting there looking at your post with fingers a-counting, and saying "what" as I say "co-zee" and still count as one.
And ya wonder why I'm not a poet.
Ginger, you are the best editor! Your hired!
Bedroom air is cold
Under covers I am warm
Late for work again
omnis_audis - Dec 21, 2007 1:25:12 pm PST #9490 of 10002
omnis, pursue. That's an order from a shy woman who can use M-16. - Shir
yikes! my poetry killed the thread! Dude! I'm sorry! I promise I'll never be poetic again! Bring back the work distraction!!!
O wait. Lets see... if it's 3:30 Pacific time, that means it's rush hour home Eastern time.... ya. That must be it. I'll not block the poetry from my brain, should it come back.
d - Dec 21, 2007 1:28:33 pm PST #9491 of 10002
It's nice to see some brave pretenders trying to make it interesting.
Bored Now at office
Hellish Week now over
Lunchtime was at 5
ack! formatting!
Cashmere - Dec 21, 2007 1:29:48 pm PST #9492 of 10002
Now tagless for your comfort.
Friday night does slow down during rush hour, o_a.
It would take more than bad poetry to kill the thread.
It's Friday night and DH brought home pizza for dinner. Half the family is already in PJ's. We're deadly boring.