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Spike's Bitches 37: You take the killing for granted.  

[NAFDA] Spike-centric discussion. Lusty, lewd (only occasionally crude), risqué (and frisqué), bawdy (Oh, lawdy!), flirty ('cuz we're purty), raunchy talk inside. Caveat lector.


Stephanie - Sep 13, 2007 10:08:21 am PDT #5465 of 10001
Trust my rage

People also write without rereading what they've written.

I work with a woman who doesn't proof read. Says she doesn't have time. The stuff we write is used as the legal basis to deport someone. It really should make sense.


Nora Deirdre - Sep 13, 2007 10:09:40 am PDT #5466 of 10001
I’m responsible for my own happiness? I can’t even be responsible for my own breakfast! (Bojack Horseman)

a new post to report on my adventures this afternoon:

1) I not only cried at my therapist's office, I made my therapist cry too.

2) I had stuck a check in my wallet to pay my therapist, and then stopped at the bank to deposit a birthday check I'd gotten. Sure enough, when I got to therapy, there was the birthday check in my wallet, waving at me, yelling, "you fucking dumbass."


Daisy Jane - Sep 13, 2007 10:12:11 am PDT #5467 of 10001
"This bar smells like kerosene and stripper tears."

((((Nora)))). Not a dumbass. Had other things on your mind.


sj - Sep 13, 2007 10:15:52 am PDT #5468 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

(((Nora))) You're definitely not dumb. That could happen to anyone.


Pix - Sep 13, 2007 10:16:28 am PDT #5469 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

{{{{{Nora}}}}} Not a dumbass at all.


SuziQ - Sep 13, 2007 10:21:52 am PDT #5470 of 10001
Back tattoos of the mother is that you are absolutely right - Ame

Not dumbass at all.

As for editing. I try to read what I have written out loud. It makes such a difference in picking up errors. I try to encourage my kids to do this too. They hate it, but at least so far K-Bug has realized that it is a good way to self-proof.


Pix - Sep 13, 2007 10:23:20 am PDT #5471 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Yep, reading out loud is one of the most important proofreading techniques that I teach my students. Seems to help a lot.


sj - Sep 13, 2007 10:35:15 am PDT #5472 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

Suzi, my favorite high school English teacher taught us to read our papers outloud while editing. It's a great trick.


megan walker - Sep 13, 2007 10:36:53 am PDT #5473 of 10001
"What kind of magical sunshine and lollipop world do you live in? Because you need to be medicated."-SFist

.useful be also can backwards Reading


askye - Sep 13, 2007 10:42:06 am PDT #5474 of 10001
Thrive to spite them

PC The other thing might be the person writing that thought they needed to be more "formal" in their writing so used awkward phrasing because it seemed better. It's weird but I know that some people feel that writing has to be "proper" and that ends up with weird stilted language.