I think the dork dumptrucks sentence is hard to understand. The rest of the letter is rocking.
Mal ,'The Train Job'
Natter 52: Playing with a full deck?
Off-topic discussion. Wanna talk about corsets, duct tape, or physics? This is the place. Detailed discussion of any current-season TV must be whitefonted.
I did finally hear back from Mom. Glen's going to be in the ICU for a few days, and then they'll be coming back here a few weeks earlier than planned so he can recuperate. Mom's worried about him, as am I. The appendix completely ruptured, so all sorts of nasty stuff wound up in the abdominal cavity and so they're trying to get the infection under control.
Pretty much what I assumed from the (brief) earlier conversation.
Allyson, I hope you get on. Of course I'll be So Damn Jealous. Oh! What about "Countdown"? KO cannot live by Musto alone(even though I *like* Michael Musto getting his bitchy queen on.) Of course that will push my jealousy up to 11.
Oh, Anne, I hope it all gets cleared up!
Spent another hour tutoring. OK, so her teachers have not introduced, or at least she didn't understand: the concept of units, cancelling or really explained the relation of fractions to division. And we're having places issues with decimals. I'm really not the best to teach this, having not had though about it since I grasped it years and years ago so will have to do some internetting.
I think I've got the places thing sorted out for her. I make her draw columns.
Oy.
Allyson, I'm sure you're coming up with a great letter. You writes good.
And, um, dur, I just was reminded there are math teachers among us. If there's any good site out there for explaining 5th gradish intro to algebra and those skills, lemme know. I mean, I can't download your brains, but maybe just having examples of explanations that don't involve me going "ok, so if I cut off my finger, what am I doing? Adding, subtracting, dividing, multiplying? What if I chopped it into many pieces?"
As soon as that came out of my mouth, I knew I needed help. And T probably did too...
I usually like Dr. Math for that kind of stuff [link] but the mathforum website doesn't seem to be loading for me right now.
I'm trying.
I feel terrible plagiarizing JZ, though.
It's not plagarizing! It's accepting editorial changes!
You asked for help!
These were my instructions:
It just has to contain these elements: DESCRIBE HERSELF AND HER AUDIENCE: eg. "I'm a pistol, and speak for the millions of people out there who live through their computers..." (tell her to take a classic "underdog position")
MY AUDIENCE CONSISTS OF MILLIONS OF PEOPLE: This would appeal to all the (X, Y, and Z people) out there, which makes up a huge part of your audience.
MY BOOK IS ABOUT AND I CAN TALK ABOUT: This doesn't have to be too long, our press release will do all the talking, but something about the "mysterious secret world of interent geeks" is fascinating, and if she says something outlandish like "we're taking over the country" then she'd have me. Remember she can touch on these briefly and you can elaborate. All we need from her is a fun little note.