While I appreciate you keeping
you -> your
Actually, both are considered acceptable. (Grammarians fight over this rule constantly.) The other corrections are good, though.
It looks good, Aims. Best luck.
I am not...I am not the damsel in distress. I am not some case. I have to work this. I've lived in a cave for 5 years in a world where they killed my kind like cattle. I am not going to be cut down by some monster flu. I am better than that. What a wonder...how very scared I am.
Fred ,'A Hole in the World'
Spike's Bitches 35: We Got a History
[NAFDA] Spike-centric discussion. Lusty, lewd (only occasionally crude), risque (and frisque), bawdy (Oh, lawdy!), flirty ('cuz we're purty), raunchy talk inside. Caveat lector.
Pix - Mar 26, 2007 8:29:46 am PDT #2317 of 10003
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
Nora Deirdre - Mar 26, 2007 8:30:06 am PDT #2318 of 10003
I’m responsible for my own happiness? I can’t even be responsible for my own breakfast! (Bojack Horseman)
Do you need to trade the healthcare for the severance? Couldn't you have both? Also, do you get COBRA coverage?
Aims - Mar 26, 2007 8:30:44 am PDT #2319 of 10003
Shit's all sorts of different now.
I'm sure I do get COBRA, but it's so spendy.
Nora Deirdre - Mar 26, 2007 8:33:30 am PDT #2320 of 10003
I’m responsible for my own happiness? I can’t even be responsible for my own breakfast! (Bojack Horseman)
so maybe not trade one for the other? I don't know. I worry!
Atropa - Mar 26, 2007 8:33:40 am PDT #2321 of 10003
The artist formerly associated with cupcakes.
Hi. My students are taking the MAP. I tried a new sleep medication -- Rozeram or Restoril or something like that.
Rozeram. I was taking it for a while, but discovered the hard way that I was a prime candidate for the "possible side effects of depression, lowered libido, and listlessness". You may want to watch out for those.
Polter-Cow - Mar 26, 2007 8:37:24 am PDT #2322 of 10003
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
Actually, both are considered acceptable. (Grammarians fight over this rule constantly.)
Is there a battle? It's always been a weird thing, because it depends on whether you consider the -ing a gerund or a participle. In this case, I think it's the "keeping" that's important, the action, which would cause me to view it as an important gerund needing a adjectival modifier. On the other hand, you might want the focus to be put on the ExBoss, in that she appreciates him via his action of keeping, which describes him.
But I don't think Aimee cares.
sj - Mar 26, 2007 8:39:18 am PDT #2323 of 10003
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."
I agree with Nora. Take out the part where you are will to trade the health insurance for severance. You deserve both.
Aims - Mar 26, 2007 8:52:02 am PDT #2324 of 10003
Shit's all sorts of different now.
I have changed it to: "in addition to keeping our health insurance."
Nora Deirdre - Mar 26, 2007 8:53:49 am PDT #2325 of 10003
I’m responsible for my own happiness? I can’t even be responsible for my own breakfast! (Bojack Horseman)
sweet!
Polter-Cow - Mar 26, 2007 8:54:35 am PDT #2326 of 10003
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!
Very sly!