Susan, do you need a WIP editor for the particular scene? Willing, if you trust me and will tell me what you want toned/beefed. And you can always say ugh, not using any of this, but thanks.
My whole life just flashed before my eyes! I gotta get me a life!
Xander ,'Dirty Girls'
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deborah grabien - Mar 24, 2003 4:38:27 pm PST #996 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Susan W. - Mar 24, 2003 4:39:42 pm PST #997 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
I'll probably take you up on that, deborah. I'll have to actually type it in first--I've taken to doing rough drafts in longhand because that way I can't check Buffistas or my yahoo groups every time I get the least little bit stuck.
deborah grabien - Mar 24, 2003 4:41:45 pm PST #998 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Susan, my email is the profile addy. Go for it, as needed.
Steph, re the back pain and the receptionist?
Interestingly, the bitch was wrong and there were about *5* rooms open. Cunt.
She has got to be related to Vicky, the Evil Bitch Twat of Death, office manager for my neurosurgeon. You don't even wanna know.....
But it certainly does sound as though your cool doc's evil assholic staff has been studying at Vicky's knee.
Theodosia - Mar 24, 2003 4:45:36 pm PST #999 of 10001
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"
Susan, sometimes it's really useful to write a sidetrack scene, to get it straight in your head how the characters are reacting, even though the scene itself is not supposed to go into the finished book. Think of it as the 90% of the fiction berg you don't see....
Susan W. - Mar 24, 2003 4:58:49 pm PST #1000 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights
Susan, sometimes it's really useful to write a sidetrack scene, to get it straight in your head how the characters are reacting, even though the scene itself is not supposed to go into the finished book. Think of it as the 90% of the fiction berg you don't see....
That's a good point--especially since one of the challenges I'm facing in this scene is trying to find a way to hint that while James is putting on an impressive act of confidence, control, and seductiveness, what he's thinking is, "I've never been with a virgin before. I wish her eyes weren't that big and scared. I don't want to hurt her. How is one supposed to do this, anyway?"
Deena - Mar 24, 2003 11:49:57 pm PST #1001 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Deb, is late better than never? I would love to read anything you've got as a reader, no edits, cross my heart. Please?
Nilly - Mar 25, 2003 2:38:13 am PST #1002 of 10001
Swouncing
is late better than never? I would love to read anything you've got as a reader, no edits, cross my heart. Please?
Deb, will you be interested in an across-the-ocean not-well-enough-with-her-English reader (I'm from Israel)? Because if you do, I second Deena here.
deborah grabien - Mar 25, 2003 9:29:11 am PST #1003 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Deena, Nilly, you bet. Profile addys?
Nilly - Mar 25, 2003 9:47:02 am PST #1004 of 10001
Swouncing
Profile addys?
Yes, Deb. Great.
deborah grabien - Mar 25, 2003 9:54:05 am PST #1005 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Nilly, sent.