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The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Susan W. - Feb 01, 2005 3:46:51 pm PST #9729 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Huh.

I just made myself cry with my own writing. I can't remember if I've ever done that before.

Which probably means the bit that brought on the weeping is either the best or the suckiest thing I've ever written.


Polter-Cow - Feb 01, 2005 4:07:41 pm PST #9730 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

I'm thinking best, Susan. I'm always impressed when I go back and read something I wrote and even I laugh. I figure if my own jokes can take me by surprise, I did something right. So if you're making yourself cry, I think you're on the right track.


Susan W. - Feb 01, 2005 4:30:08 pm PST #9731 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Maybe. But I've found that many scenes I thought were beautiful, artistic works of subtle foreshadowing and layered themes at the time I was writing them were actually too clever by half and had to be deleted the next day--or usually a month or two later when I was finally objective enough to judge. So it wouldn't surprise me if what strikes me as touching today will reveal itself to be maudlin once I've come down from the writer high.


Beverly - Feb 01, 2005 7:04:40 pm PST #9732 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Teppy, are we celebrating an anniversary? Two people, one standing, one sitting was the first-ever drabble we had, I think. Wasn't it?


Hil R. - Feb 01, 2005 7:05:26 pm PST #9733 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

I thought the first was one standing, one lying down.


deborah grabien - Feb 01, 2005 8:36:20 pm PST #9734 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Porno

oh please oh please...

It's a dare. She's dared herself, and of course he's taken her up on it. It's what they do; she charging headlong into shadow, light, the echo of dark disturbance, he egging her on, reaping the reward.

pleasepleaseplease

It was he who upped the ante, suggesting the high heels. No way to say to say no, not for her. Now, wearing nothing else, she stands as he sits and makes himself comfortable, and reaches behind her and pulls her close.

A few minutes later, she goes down in a puddling heap. And he wins another dare.


Beverly - Feb 01, 2005 11:15:48 pm PST #9735 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Heh, Deb. Nice.

Hil, you're right. Memory's leaking like a sieve these days.


Pix - Feb 02, 2005 2:55:26 am PST #9736 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

I'm taking an odd comfort in the fact that I'm not the only one who instantly went to porn when she saw the drabble topic. I tried to write a very similar one last night and then my brain said "no", mainly, I think, because it was completely exhausted.

After work today, I'll tackle this one.


erikaj - Feb 02, 2005 4:01:10 am PST #9737 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I didn't, but I might *now*. Thanks. Might be fun to write about live bodies. I've given the prompt to my friend? The one that inspired the book, right? He's been complaining of being stuck.So I said "Here's a challenge. Go." I feel like such a top right now!


Steph L. - Feb 02, 2005 4:31:28 am PST #9738 of 10001
Unusually and exceedingly peculiar and altogether quite impossible to describe

Teppy, are we celebrating an anniversary? Two people, one standing, one sitting was the first-ever drabble we had, I think. Wasn't it?

The very first one was two people seated at a table, across from each other.

Later, we did the two people, one standing and one lying down.