Dreg: Glory, Your Most Fresh-And-Cleanness. It's only a matter of time-- Glory: Ugh, everything always takes time! What about my time? Does anyone appreciate I'm on a schedule here?! Tick tock, Dreg! Tick freakin' tock!

'Sleeper'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


erikaj - Jan 02, 2005 2:33:24 pm PST #9134 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I was just thinking about similar stuff, earlier today.

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Why type it over again? Am I overreacting?


Connie Neil - Jan 02, 2005 2:52:45 pm PST #9135 of 10001
brillig

No, I don't think you're over-reacting. I've seen lots of commentary in various places saying "You can't write X, you're a Y!" It's a big reason some writers use pseudonyms, like if Stephen King suddenly wanted to write Harlequin romances.

Pause to shudder in twisted delight.

Would the characters speak like that? Can you hear them in your head speaking the lines you want them to? That's how I do most of my dialogue, I turn on the mental movie projector and see if the rhythm of the words work coming out of that character's mouth. Sometimes they don't, and I lean back in my chair and swear.

Yes, it's you putting the words on the paper. But if you're doing it at all write--and, knowing you, you probably are--then you're not the one speaking on the page. You're just taking dictation.


SailAweigh - Jan 02, 2005 2:55:44 pm PST #9136 of 10001
Nana korobi, ya oki. (Fall down seven times, stand up eight.) ~Yuzuru Hanyu/Japanese proverb

erika, I think you're panicking a little and that can lead to, maybe not overreacting, but worse-case-scenarioing? I mean, look at some of the shows you watch. They get into the nitty-gritty of street life, do you think all the writers have been cornerboys, if any of them? You can do it, too.


Connie Neil - Jan 02, 2005 2:56:42 pm PST #9137 of 10001
brillig

Cereal:

I'm finally doing it. Taking the first draft of the novel I finished about three years ago and going over it with an eye towards marketability. The revised opening is done, and t deep breath I'm asking if anyone would like to see it. t chants calming mantra "They're my friends, they're my friends, if they say it sucks it's not because they hate you"

Specifically, I'm wondering if it's a story that a reader would want to know more of, is the main character plausable, and later questions to follow depending on initial reactions.

So. t muzzling the Interior Critic who is screaming in terror Anyone want to see it?


Amy - Jan 02, 2005 3:00:06 pm PST #9138 of 10001
Because books.

Connie, I'd love to read it. Is that the only feedback you want, or specific line editing / typo catching stuff, too?


erikaj - Jan 02, 2005 3:02:38 pm PST #9139 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Maybe one or two. Mostly they arrested them or reported on them.


Hil R. - Jan 02, 2005 3:03:17 pm PST #9140 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

I'll read it, Connie.


Connie Neil - Jan 02, 2005 3:04:12 pm PST #9141 of 10001
brillig

Is that the only feedback you want, or specific line editing / typo catching stuff, too?

If you spot typos or glaring usage errors, please, let me know. I'm blind to such things for at least 12 hours after I write stuff. Profile addy?


Connie Neil - Jan 02, 2005 3:11:11 pm PST #9142 of 10001
brillig

AmyLiz and Hil, insent. No hurry, I just want to see if I'm on the write track with this opening.

edit: Damned Freudian homonyms. Right track.


deborah grabien - Jan 02, 2005 3:52:21 pm PST #9143 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Hell yeah, connie. Send it.

The only person my writing should really matter to is me.

And here you have tied directly into my deep discomfort with crit, whether on the level of teaching it, or getting paid to write it. I have absolutely no humility in me anywhere, so this isn't humble or faux-humble. It's pure puzzlement.

My opinion is mine, belonging to me, and if you want to hear it, I'll be glad to tell you. But value to anyone else but me? What the hell should it?

Anyone out there reading these words is presumably capable of reading and thinking and formulating their own take on stuff. So I get deeply uncomfortable with telling people not only why I feel one way about something, but far more uncomfortable about even considering telling them why they should think that.

I mean, go! Go go go! Go and read, or listen, or gaze, or stroke, or dance on your own, or whatever, but understand that the only thing I'm giving you, whether on your own stuff or anyone else's, is my opinion, mine, belonging to me.

Hopefully, those asking will find it useful. But if not? It aint the frickin' holy grail.

edited, to say it doesn't apply to people requesting feedback on the stuff they, themselves, have created. Different thing entirely.