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Spike ,'Sleeper'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


victor infante - Dec 30, 2004 6:03:29 pm PST #8958 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

woot! Go, Victor!

Thanks. Strange being asked for something by a predominatly Afro-centric Web site, but then, I always marvel at where these things end up.


§ ita § - Dec 30, 2004 7:14:48 pm PST #8959 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I suppose it would have been possible to lean back, to breathe, to look around the room. But what would have been the point? What possible reward could be gained from breaking contact with those sharp black eyes, what if I missed a flash of the bright teeth set in dark gums, or if that lock of hair dropped into his face again without me to witness it?

His hands are articulate, and I try not to touch them, but suddenly we're somewhere else, and I'm reaching out for him, holding, grabbing, trying not to fall away in the dark.


Lee - Dec 30, 2004 7:43:45 pm PST #8960 of 10001
The feeling you get when your brain finally lets your heart get in its pants.

The floor was a long way away, which made me giggle.

It wasn’t the first time I’d smoked pot, but it was the first time it had had any effect. I didn’t think it had this time either, until I was home, in bed, and looked over the edge of the mattress.

I tried to stifle the giggle, since mom and dad were in the room directly below mine. I suppose they might not have heard it, if it hadn’t been for me falling out of bed, still giggling.


WildDemon Cornelius - Dec 31, 2004 12:48:36 am PST #8961 of 10001
Take your fingers off it, don't you dare touch it, you know it don't belong to you, to you...

(Hang tens Victor for that article) Seems to me poetry's always being declared dead by someone or another, and someone or another's usually wrong.


Anne W. - Dec 31, 2004 4:55:28 am PST #8962 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.

Deb, if you're still in need of a beta, I'd be happy to take a look at it.


victor infante - Dec 31, 2004 5:05:50 am PST #8963 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

(Hang tens Victor for that article) Seems to me poetry's always being declared dead by someone or another, and someone or another's usually wrong.

I have sooooo little patience for all the hacks who declare the death of poetry, be they nobodies like Bruce Wexler or annoying somebodies like Harold Bloom.

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I've made it among my literary missions to point out just how ridiculous this particular logic is.


deborah grabien - Dec 31, 2004 7:06:38 am PST #8964 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Anne, will send.

Victor, I agree. And pronouncements like "this is dead" or "this is the New Wave" is yet another reason I avoid the entire literary discussion deal like the plague. Because, shut UP, people, as long as there are human beings writing, and processing, there's going to be this output.

What Mister Black Beret Guy really means is "I need to justify the ludicrous amounts of money I spent on grad school and oh, yeah, while I'm at it I need to define some sort of 'cultural' gestalt because I feel a desperate need to make my mark on the mass memory and I'm sure as hell not going to do it any other way, damn, what'll work, something, ooooh! POETRY IS DEAD! ALERT THE MEDIA!"

I'll pass on that one. Silliness.


erikaj - Dec 31, 2004 7:31:18 am PST #8965 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

You just made me think of the silliest fic, ever, Deb. I'm too busy to write it, but, speaking of writing, my latest is here. I considered making a Press announcement, but this seemed more fitting. Hope you like it. [link] Edited to fix botched link.


deborah grabien - Dec 31, 2004 7:49:06 am PST #8966 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

erika! It looks gorgeous. Beaming with pride, since I got to beta the piece, too.


erikaj - Dec 31, 2004 8:04:48 am PST #8967 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

This is true. Thanks, Deb. And thanks to Betsy, who spotted the market for me. I had to dump a lot of stuff I really cared about, but I got to keep the expletives. Fuck, yes.