Mal: Take your people and go. Captain: You would have done the same. Mal: We can already see I haven't.

'Out Of Gas'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


erikaj - Dec 29, 2004 4:02:26 pm PST #8921 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Yeah, it's weird, but it's cool, Victor.


victor infante - Dec 29, 2004 4:03:07 pm PST #8922 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Yeah, it's weird, but it's cool, Victor.

Gracias.


deborah grabien - Dec 29, 2004 4:26:54 pm PST #8923 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Victor, as much as I love you, my loathing for Andy Kaufman is such that I can't even see the man's name without grinding my molars.


victor infante - Dec 29, 2004 4:32:28 pm PST #8924 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Victor, as much as I love you, my loathing for Andy Kaufman is such that I can't even see the man's name without grinding my molars.

Ouch. Sorry. I'm kind of living with him right now...


erikaj - Dec 29, 2004 4:35:14 pm PST #8925 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

The cleaning bills must be enormous. Has he wrestled Thessaly yet?


victor infante - Dec 29, 2004 4:36:38 pm PST #8926 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Has he wrestled Thessaly yet?

No. He knows full well she could kill him with her pinkie.


erikaj - Dec 29, 2004 4:39:08 pm PST #8927 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Ok, so at least death taught him something.


deborah grabien - Dec 29, 2004 4:40:17 pm PST #8928 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

He knows full well she could kill him with her pinkie.

If we had a time machine, I'd go back and kill him with my pinkie.

Sorry, darlin'. Like Tolkein and a few other cultural phenomena? He was a meeting missed for me.

I have taken advantage of having an at-least-temporarily functional DSL to send in my "My Turn" piece. Also, go me, with no DSL earlier, because I wrote seven pages of "Cruel Sister."


deborah grabien - Dec 30, 2004 7:32:32 am PST #8929 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Anyone up for a chapter section beta?


deborah grabien - Dec 30, 2004 7:39:51 am PST #8930 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

(serial)

Separate

Atop a high hill, I look down at grief and carnage.

Above me, Mt. Tam's treeline arcs in dark spruce edges across the sky. Around me are stopped vehicles, bumper to bumper on this holiday weekend, hushed people, some with hands at their mouths, intent on swallowing their fear of mortality.

Below me, the shattered Cadillac, broken glass, smoking metal, eucalyptus buttons, a girl with shattered bones, holding a dead child.

I come down from the high hill, knowing this one precious moment of separation is done, and fall back into my skin. Eve, eyes open, cools in my arms.