Can I ask for some beta feedback, when everyone's back from Christmas?
I wrote the "My Turn" piece. It's 965 words, first pass, not edited, and I'd love some feedback.
River: You gave up everything you had. Simon: [Chinese] Everything I have is right here.
'Safe'
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deborah grabien - Dec 25, 2004 8:45:14 am PST #8873 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Ginger - Dec 25, 2004 8:48:46 am PST #8874 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda
I could look at it next week, Deb. Right now I'm a prisoner at my mother's and I'm on the World's Slowest Dialup.
Pix - Dec 25, 2004 9:01:41 am PST #8875 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie
I could beta tomorrow, Deb. Today is bad.
deborah grabien - Dec 25, 2004 9:09:13 am PST #8876 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Today is definitely bad. I'll send to both of you - when you get a chance is good.
Thanks both!
erikaj - Dec 25, 2004 9:19:15 am PST #8877 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
I could do it tonight, photo ops being what they are.
deborah grabien - Dec 25, 2004 9:28:16 am PST #8878 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
erika, insending. Remember, all, this is unedited. Beta feedback is of the goodness.
Anne W. - Dec 25, 2004 9:48:27 am PST #8879 of 10001
The lost sheep grow teeth, forsake their lambs, and lie with the lions.
Deb, I might have time tomorrow to look things over, if you'd like to send it along.
deborah grabien - Dec 25, 2004 9:50:50 am PST #8880 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Check your email, Anne.
Beverly - Dec 25, 2004 6:21:15 pm PST #8881 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.
Me too, please. I'll get back to you tomorrow.
deborah grabien - Dec 25, 2004 8:35:45 pm PST #8882 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
Insent, sweetie. It's fairly close now, I think, thanks to an early first-round beta by erika, and some rare feedback from Nic.