Damn it! You know what? I'm sick of this crap. I'm sick of being the guy who eats insects and gets the funny syphilis. As of this moment, it's over. I'm finished being everybody's butt monkey!

Xander ,'Lessons'


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A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


§ ita § - Dec 07, 2004 4:23:41 pm PST #8574 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Oh, erika, have them hold the floor end of the crutch and swing like a baseball bat. Mucho deado.


erikaj - Dec 07, 2004 4:29:04 pm PST #8575 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Good to know.


Susan W. - Dec 07, 2004 7:39:28 pm PST #8576 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

What would someone a few months away from death of tuberculosis look like? Deathly pallor or hectic bloom?

I'd think pallor, but I know in the Anne of Green Gables series, when Anne comes home from college one summer and learns that Ruby Gillis is dying of consumption, there was something about the roses in her cheeks being too bright.


Ginger - Dec 07, 2004 7:58:13 pm PST #8577 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

I think that flushed face is in the earlier part of the disease, when there are intermittent fevers. By the end, you get the reason why it's called consumption--weight loss, hollow cheeks, dry skin and the characteristic cough.

eta: Here's a 1907 description [link]


Susan W. - Dec 07, 2004 8:25:16 pm PST #8578 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Thanks, Ginger--that's perfect.


§ ita § - Dec 07, 2004 8:43:59 pm PST #8579 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I heard what you said, and I know what you meant, and either you're stupid, or you don't know me at all. When you say quality of life, you mean your life. Not mine. You train me to duck and to kick and then you go home to your family. I'm out there, hitting and getting hit, and that's my life. That's my quality, man. So when you tell me the next good hit I take could be my last, I say bring it on. Let him try. But that's how I'm going out, not home, sitting, almost dead forever.


JoeCrow - Dec 07, 2004 10:32:55 pm PST #8580 of 10001
"what's left when you take biology and sociology out of the picture?" "An autistic hermaphodite." -Allyson

Quite liked that one, actually.

Still shaving words off mine, at the moment.

Y'know, my kid's probably gonna end up a lot like you, ita. Not sure how comforting that is...


Brynn - Dec 08, 2004 6:24:57 am PST #8581 of 10001
"I'd rather discuss the permutations of swordplay, with an undertone of definite allusion to sex." Beverly, offering an example of when your characters give you 'tude.

erika: It's great that the research engages you... Apart from when you get that first twist of an idea in your belly or into one of those frenetic grooves where it feels as if the words are scrolling behind your eyes, I think the "aha!" or "boo!" moments in research are often what keeps me going.

Also... (and humour me, as I've now been awake for 48 hours) I'm thinking as a side project you could create some sort of CSI/L&O update of Clue... It's hightime we gave Colonel Mustard a more innocuous name, took his candlestick away, kicked him out of the billiard room and stuck him in the meat-packing district with crutch! Best game of Clue ever, I say...

Phew. Off to drop off paper # 1 ... 2 weeks, 2 more to go. Ooohh printing out your story now Deb, that way I can bask in it during the long busride to campus.

edited because I forgot the "belly."


erikaj - Dec 08, 2004 6:42:09 am PST #8582 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Yeah... "Exgirlfriend drops a dime. Move back three spaces." "The police find a claw hammer in your truck. But you're a carpenter. Move ahead five spaces." "You have a chance to flip on Miss Scarlet for a lighter sentence. But the forensics are lousy. Do you take a chance with the jury?"


deborah grabien - Dec 08, 2004 7:12:18 am PST #8583 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

"The client's sister, in the Social Services supply closet, with an aluminium crutch."