We didn't have sex, if that's what you mean. That's all I do now, not have sex.

Anya ,'Dirty Girls'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Jesse - Oct 25, 2004 10:04:21 am PDT #7707 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

OK, here's a cheesy high school drabble. (Even worse if you know the song...)

"Let me hear you tell me you love me…"

Sitting in the dark, singing along with a tape. Where did everyone go? Somehow, it’s just the two of us, lights off, singing along with the duet. It’s intimate in a way we’d never be with the lights on, would never be in our own voices. We’re too young, too busy protecting ourselves. Too busy believing in high school reputations.

"Make it last forever…."

A couple of weeks later, we go to the Prom together. A couple of weeks after that, we’ve broken up. Not that we were ever really together


erikaj - Oct 25, 2004 10:05:55 am PDT #7708 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I've got one, but I've got a thought that I'm not sure if I'm expressing, you know.
Sometimes life would be simpler if there was a score like the movies or TV, to help us figure out which episode we’re in. No more “Is this a date?” if when you saw each other, Al Green started to play.(Good thing you shaved your legs.)Maybe a blues for when it’s the end of the month and you’re scouring for change under the couch. Yes, again. Sigh.Work days might go faster under the driving beat of “Money’.The local news, home of “If it bleeds, it leads” should be accompanied by “Boom, Boom, Boom” And I really missed Bruce at the union hall the other day, “My hometown” maybe.


deborah grabien - Oct 25, 2004 10:09:07 am PDT #7709 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Jesse, I love that entire thing, but the last line is superb. Sums up the whole experience.


Jesse - Oct 25, 2004 10:09:41 am PDT #7710 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

I TOTALLY know what you're saying, erika! I mostly notice when the real-life backgroud music IS what would be on the soundtrack, just then.


deborah grabien - Oct 25, 2004 10:10:05 am PDT #7711 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

erika, YESyesyesyes.


Jesse - Oct 25, 2004 10:10:48 am PDT #7712 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

Aw, thanks, Deb. I swear I could do a whole "Prom" (or, even better, dances more generally) series. That music is so vivid in my head.


deborah grabien - Oct 25, 2004 10:12:41 am PDT #7713 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Heh. I should be working on my Long Black Veil story, and starting "Cruel Sister", and this drabble topic is so totally cooking me, I may have to stay with it until it burns itself out.


erikaj - Oct 25, 2004 10:16:56 am PDT #7714 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I liked that one, Jesse. I spent that whole day at the union hall feeling the Springsteen vibe. Kept waiting for the "Big Man" to show up.


§ ita § - Oct 25, 2004 11:11:27 am PDT #7715 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I know I shouldn't do this. He's a friend, and we want it to stay that way, although we're too scared to talk about it.

I just...I can't let this song go without dancing. It's not something I can do alone. I need, for a second, to close my eyes, pretend I'm being held by someone else.

Anyone else, really, anyone who wants to be holding me more than they want to hold anyone else, someone who's going to be hard to let go. And it will be our song.

This music makes it hurt too much to be alone.


Consuela - Oct 25, 2004 11:12:52 am PDT #7716 of 10001
We are Buffistas. This isn't our first apocalypse. -- Pix

135 words for the Music challenge.

It’s four hours from Queens to Boston, and we make the trip twice every year, Connecticut growing larger each time.

Dad finds an AM station playing songs from his childhood, and begins singing along. When we lose the station he keeps going:

“Jimmy crack corn and I don’t care . . .”

“I gave my love a cherry without a stone . . .”

“There’s a hole in the bottom of the sea . . .”

Song after song, dredged from his memory and imprinted on four school-aged children in the darkness. Year after year, as the old wagon ages along with the relatives in Queens.

When I’m twelve, we buy a new van, shiny and red. We stop going to New York for holidays.

The new car is a poor replacement for Radio Dad.