Susan, would you mind if I submitted that romance writer's PATRIOT Act story to lisnews.com?

ION, still sick. Have reached the most frustrating point of recuperation, where you have just enough energy to be bored but not enough to do anything but lie about.

Dani--For something like that where it's more official, I'd feel more comfortable if the magazine gave permission to reprint it. I could snail-mail you the whole article and the editorial contact info, if you're interested.

Deena, that piece reminds me of Betsy's story about her son, Will, living up to his name. Her father asked her, "What do you suppose would have happened if you'd named him Compliant?"

Susan, those were really good vignettes. I like Anna's comeback to the scumbag officer.

Deena--that's vivid, and oh-so-familiar.

I like Anna's comeback to the scumbag officer.

Since she spends a chunk of the early going as a Damsel, it's fun to give her the chance to be a Badass.

I fucking hate synopses.

That is all.

Susan rooooooocks.

I have an existing 6-page synopsis for Lucy. Today I sat down and drafted a synopsis for Anna, not thinking about the length, just getting the important plot points and character motivations in. It's 7 pages.

The agent I'm submitting to likes 3-pagers. I can't cut these things in half without turning them into nonsense. I'm going to have to figure out a way to distill the essence and rewrite.

Thing is, I can do a decent single-page or even single-paragraph synopsis, because all you're really going for there is a basic story hook and sense of the type of conflict and what changes the characters have to make to overcome it. But how I'm supposed to get any coherent plot summary, representation of my voice and style, and sense of the characters into three pages, I have no idea.

I am going to sleep, so here is my stupid idea:

Clear your mind, close your eyes, and write down the first three plot points that come to mind. Focus on those. Ta da!

Yeah, I suck.

I'm actually planning something close to that. I'm going to write down a bullet point plot list, just the barest essentials, and try to keep it to no more than ten points per book. And then I'll build the rest around it, focusing more on character and what drives the romance than getting every important happening in.

And I'm going to do it tomorrow, because it's 11:30, and if I tried it now, it wouldn't be my best work.

Dani, I had never heard about lisnews, and I don't think Greg knew about it either, so I sent him the link. I'm glad you posted it.

Susan, I am really enjoying the bits we're getting of Anna's story. It was pretty frustrating not to be able to nurse any of my babies. There are such huge expectations out there for new moms to live up to. I hope your essay is accepted.

Deb, to state the obvious, those are painful.

I've been enjoying all the drabbles. There are some amazing minds in this thread.

ita, yours always make me want to know more. I like that.