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A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


victor infante - Oct 19, 2004 9:12:28 am PDT #7535 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Warhol Days Part Two

Mary-Louise intends to dance across the fluorescent-lit aisles of every Wal-Mart Supercenter in Georgia. It’s a goal that’s brewed longer than truck stop coffee, since that fateful day at age 15 the cameras caught her stealing lipstick at K-Mart. In that instant, she realized that this was a blue light Made for Closed-Caption TV special, and this was her moment to shine.

“Because this is America,” she thought, “and you ain’t worth nothing if you ain’t on TV.”

She curled her lip and began to quiver—carefully starting with chattering teeth then building quickly until her knees were wobbly. She fell to the floor of the stage, her face soaked with tears. Not a dry eye in the place, and even the lemon-bitter manager was moved. She got off with a warning, and a star was born.

Soon, she found herself performing awkward ballet to the Celine Dion tune crooned through tinny speakers, remaining motionless when a sales assistant is paged, or a special is announced. One night, she recited Orsinio’s “If music be the food of love, play on” speech in the pet supplies department. Another night, she sang “Amazing Grace” at full volume, the stunned applause of K-Mart shoppers ringing against dilapidated shelves.

The explosion of Wal-Mart cemented the deal, her impromptu performances moved to shinier stages. It was like playing Rockefeller Center, with those clean floors and cameras everywhere, broadcasting to only God and the District Manager knows whom.

She can’t repress a smile each time she sees the lens on the corner of her vision, because it’s in these moments she knows this is America, and in America, someone’s always watching.


Beverly - Oct 19, 2004 9:15:05 am PDT #7536 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Oh wow, Victor. I think I know her. Masterfully done.


erikaj - Oct 19, 2004 9:20:58 am PDT #7537 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I think that is the best one, ita. Not that I sit around and grade these when I read them... ION, I am a research machine today. And the woman at the desk at Phoenix Homicide was charmed by my Simon reference...seperated at birth, I'm telling you. Their phones still sound too much like mine, though. :) Research calls go well when I let my Pembleton out. Not quite like "Please don't be an idiot..." more like "Of course I know what I'm doing...and lucky you, you get to help." So, yeah, going against my first instinct.


victor infante - Oct 19, 2004 11:24:54 am PDT #7538 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Oh wow, Victor. I think I know her. Masterfully done.

Gracias. It's all part of ... something. Don't know what yet.


Allyson - Oct 19, 2004 11:29:53 am PDT #7539 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

“Call me Allyson, please. But never Ally. I hate that.”

I CALL SHOUTOUT!

Wheeeee!


Pix - Oct 19, 2004 11:33:00 am PDT #7540 of 10001
We're all getting played with, babe. -Weird Barbie

Deb, insent.

Allyson, what is that from? Did I miss it earlier in the thread?


§ ita § - Oct 19, 2004 11:33:21 am PDT #7541 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

It's from erika's story.


Liese S. - Oct 19, 2004 11:38:51 am PDT #7542 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

It's all part of ... something. Don't know what yet.

Say book, say book, say book...


victor infante - Oct 19, 2004 12:03:22 pm PDT #7543 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

The making of friends and the influencing of people continues in my Gotpoetry.com column:

Only an idiot would want to be a writer

I'll drive people away from a career in writing yet!


erikaj - Oct 19, 2004 12:09:11 pm PDT #7544 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Guilty as charged, Allyson.