Oh, good! It's doing its job. Always a good thing.
Xander ,'Empty Places'
The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
(oh, and psssst, interesting scary things start happening right after the pub and the money....)
Yeah. Need to just plunge in and trust.ETA: Stanley. :)
Yep. Literally, within a paragraph or nine of the pub thing. Ringan, alone in the theatre.
First true look at the Bellefield ghost's, um, issues.
It's weird, I keep getting hung up on the fact that I know the historical references and want to get on with the story, but you need to explain the references to folks who may never have thought about the 14th century before. Historical fiction can be a trial for an SCAer: "I know about Tyburn, darn it, get on with what he's found out already!"
Deb is the spoiler source for her own story. Heh.
I don't know if I'm justified, but I'm feeling sorry for the ghost.
I don't know if I'm justified, but I'm feeling sorry for the ghost.
(grinning with pleasure)
Taunting author.
edit: I am resisting the urge to hop to the end to see if my sympathies are justified or not.
"Don't taunt the reader."
"Why, can she hurt me?"
"No, it's just...tacky."