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The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Polter-Cow - Oct 08, 2004 8:50:24 pm PDT #7122 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Deb, this page might be helpful in understanding genetic transmission of diseases, especially the more unconventional kind. Of special notice is the section on mitochondrial DNA, if you want your disease to be transmitted only from the mother. I'm going to sleep now, but if you have any more questions, I'll be here tomorrow.


deborah grabien - Oct 08, 2004 8:57:14 pm PDT #7123 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

'tis good. Sleep well!


Deena - Oct 09, 2004 6:06:07 am PDT #7124 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Deb, you might check on how Albinism is passed down. It's a recessive that is sometimes passed down through the mother. There are a couple of different kinds, and if you modeled your disease on that, it could have a certain percentage of the children who get it die, a certain percentage do what you want, and a certain percentage where it's not really obvious that they have it at all. This page explains it for the layperson pretty well.


deborah grabien - Oct 09, 2004 7:22:34 am PDT #7125 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Deena, you're a mind-reader, because that was the next thing on my list. I'd been looking at something that would a) be viral or possibly bacterial in nature (remembering that one of my early theses was on the Black Death), b) not evince symptoms in the initial carrier, but c) trigger a chromosomal malfunction in said carrier's descendents.

The first thing that comes to mind is haemophilia (I can never remember whether it's factor 7 or factor 8 that's affected there), because the results were so damned visible, courtesy of the Tsarevitch and Rasputin. And most of the conventional wisdom when I was growing up was that it was through Victoria's line, her father was what, 57, when she was conceived, a mutation in the sperm.

But of course there are other conditions as well.

My neurologist is actually in a pool of highly research-oriented doctors who believe that MS is triggered virally.

Since the science in this one needs to be accurate - it's the lynchpin for the story, and the main reason the two older vampires have to work with their potential dinner, instead of eating it - research is indicated.

The grandparents affected are going to be Hollywood industry bankers and backers in the 1950s, big money types. I'm going to use William Holden's Mount Kenya Safari Club, or a slightly earlier version thereof, as the site where the viral species jump first happens over dinner. And Nic, bless him, sent me all the info about how the vampires can find instances in their own cultural lore about earlier outbreaks.


Deena - Oct 09, 2004 11:10:39 am PDT #7126 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Oooh, that just sounds so exciting, Deb. I can't wait to read it.


Betsy HP - Oct 09, 2004 3:19:07 pm PDT #7127 of 10001
If I only had a brain...

God. I signe dup for a novel-in-a-weekend competition. My job: to write a novel in a weekend.

The idea is to turn off the censor-mind, to just write.

I can't do this. I keep noticing how much I am sucking.


§ ita § - Oct 09, 2004 3:20:03 pm PDT #7128 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

Did you sign up to write a good novel in a weekend?


Betsy HP - Oct 09, 2004 3:33:55 pm PDT #7129 of 10001
If I only had a brain...

No. Just a novel.

On the other hand, if I backed out, I could go to the art and wine festival tomorrow. And I could continue to write the novel at a leisurely pace.


Polter-Cow - Oct 09, 2004 3:36:48 pm PDT #7130 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Ooh. NaNoWriWee.


Betsy HP - Oct 09, 2004 3:38:46 pm PDT #7131 of 10001
If I only had a brain...

Yup. 72 hours, take no prisoners. (It was originally Labor Day Weekend, but we rewrote it so it was a choice of Labor Day or Columbus Day.)