It's not like she blew me off. She just left with another guy, that's all.

Riley ,'Conversations with Dead People'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


erikaj - Sep 28, 2004 1:54:01 pm PDT #6870 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Or you know, the Minears and Lehanes of the world that cap everyone.. (lightbulb) Oh, like Big Pussy on the Sopranos...he died and we're all still sad about it. Even Tony is, and he handled that bit of business personally. And we knew and liked him for the most part so that's why he's a good rat and a good corpse.


Susan W. - Sep 28, 2004 3:03:17 pm PDT #6871 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Drums drabble:

Left…Left…Left-Right-Left

The annual 4th of July parade, and I’m marching right behind the drummers. When we get to Main Street we’ll play, but for now we’re silent but for the “boom, boom, boom” of the bass drum marking time. My left foot hits the ground exactly timed with each beat. Five years in band and I can’t NOT fall into step with a drumline.

The eighth grader playing bass drum isn’t marching. He’s just walking. His feet are completely divorced from the metronome beat his arm plays. I don’t know whether I’m more impressed or appalled. How can you hear a drumbeat, much less MAKE one, and not have it take over?


deborah grabien - Sep 28, 2004 9:53:02 pm PDT #6872 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Soundcheck (Skull and Roses)

It's pouring, pissing down all over New York with a miserable winter rain. Not quite three in the afternoon, and it's already dark, neon and taxi headlights streaking across oil-splashed streets outside the Manhattan Centre.

I flap my backstage pass at the guard and run for the warmth and dryness of the lobby. A roadie nods, busy; onstage, guitars and bass sit cradled in their stands.

Behind the two sets of drums, Bill and Mickey are taking a break. I slide off my sodden coat.

And the perfectly meshed downbeats of one solid drummer and one worldclass percussionist light up the empty hall.


Beverly - Sep 28, 2004 10:05:03 pm PDT #6873 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

As we pull into the lot the sound insinuates into the car. We get out and it surrounds us, pulls us in. We walk for long minutes, passing rows of cars. There are dozens of people walking, in straggling groups, in clumps, singly, all moving toward where the sound is coming from. We reach the end of the grass, the edge of a sharp drop and look down on the dancing ground. At one end sits the circle, a stick in every other hand, and one tenor voice rising in insistent plaint to the relentless beat of the drum.


Pix - Sep 29, 2004 3:02:35 am PDT #6874 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Drums drabble: 100 words exactly

His fingers are drumming on the desk, a restless tattoo breaking the quiet. His foot is tapping counterpoint. The book is open, but his eyes are roaming the room. He is looking anywhere but down; he is anywhere but here. His hands and feet are pulling him into some wild elsewhere.

My voice is mild, a gentle correction. "Mike. Hon, would you mind? It's hard to concentrate."

The drumming abruptly ceases, and his eyes snap back to me, sheepish smile on his lips. "Sorry, Ms. T.--it's just the beat. Can’t stop hearing it."

I know. I hear it too.


erikaj - Sep 29, 2004 4:49:44 am PDT #6875 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Pow-Wow

There’s part of me that always responds to the native beat of the drums at a pow-wow, as if it didn’t get the memo on my being the palest of pale white chicks. Mostly. Because there’s always a little pause, like when I check The Box. Checking just Caucasian feels like another lie, and my God, haven’t there been enough? But if I don’t have the pain, I shouldn’t take the name.(And our brothers at the tribe wanted seven hundred dollars to list us. Thanks, brothers, although it really does make me feel related to you.)

The women next to us seem nice, until one of them mentions that she’d like...private instruction from one of the hoop dancers, who, admittedly is a warrior fantasy come to life. But they’re groupies, shagging their way through the Western states in a very dick-grabbing fashion that makes me hope nobody thinks we’re like...with them or anything. My pale skin blushes, and I concentrate on the drums.


Polter-Cow - Sep 29, 2004 4:52:27 am PDT #6876 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Another great drabble, erika. Love the bits about the memo and The Box. I didn't know you were part Indian. Native American. Whichever.


Dani - Sep 29, 2004 5:44:21 am PDT #6877 of 10001
I believe vampires are the world's greatest golfers

Not really here, just popping in to ask Steph - could we have a "last time" challenge (to bookend the "first time" one) eventually?


erikaj - Sep 29, 2004 5:52:04 am PDT #6878 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

My grandfather was half Muskegon(Creek) Polter-Cow. When you get into eighths though it doesn't come up that much. But I am a direct descendant which is different from trying to get into a sweat lodge from three generations back...or thinking I'm a reincarnated shaman princess or something.


Susan W. - Sep 29, 2004 6:14:15 am PDT #6879 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Ah yes, the dreaded Cherokee princess syndrome. I can relate to having a heritage that doesn't show up in your phenotype from the opposite side--people who guess my ancestry always guess Irish, Indian, or both. I think if you actually parsed out all my ancestry, I'd be at least half Scots-Irish, but that's Not The Same Thing At All, and I only recently discovered that I do in fact have the usual dollop of Indian blood (Creek, too) that makes lots of Southerners claim the Cherokee princess thing.