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The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Susan W. - Sep 14, 2004 7:32:12 am PDT #6564 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

And until the neighbor caught Tekla in the act, she was probably wondering who the creepy pervy underwear thief was!


deborah grabien - Sep 14, 2004 7:39:05 am PDT #6565 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I don't remember any of the conversation, just that she handed me the cat, who did not want to let go of the damned bra. Tekla was the Mighty Hunter; she actually taught Pig to hunt (Pig was 22 pounds of muscle). So far as I remember, Pig never felt any urge to stalk the Wild French Thong to its lair, and slay it, though. He preferred rodents.


Susan W. - Sep 14, 2004 7:09:07 pm PDT #6566 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Any beta readers in the house, with time to read a chapter and a half (32 double-spaced 12-point Courier pages) in the next day or so?


deborah grabien - Sep 14, 2004 8:59:43 pm PDT #6567 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Susan, send, ma'am. Probably tomorrow night before I get to it, though; the week is mildly crunchy.


Susan W. - Sep 14, 2004 9:18:05 pm PDT #6568 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Insent, deb. I sent a separate second email with questions about what I see as the problem areas, but please don't read it till after you've read the piece--I want to see if the problems I see still show up for an unbiased reader who's not predisposed to look for them. For the rest, whatever strikes you as needing comment. I always appreciate help adding appropriate sensory detail, and the second chapter, which is new and therefore rough, especially needs it. Thanks!


deborah grabien - Sep 15, 2004 6:25:13 am PDT #6569 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Susan, got it, and will read later today. In the meanwhile? ANd on the subject of your books?

I'm betting these make you go 'ooooooooooooooh!'


sumi - Sep 15, 2004 6:26:36 am PDT #6570 of 10001
Art Crawl!!!

Wow. Those are beautiful. I think Susan needs them for research purposes.


Dani - Sep 15, 2004 6:27:28 am PDT #6571 of 10001
I believe vampires are the world's greatest golfers

I can read a chapter today or tomorrow, Susan, if you still need beta-readers. Profile address is good.


Susan W. - Sep 15, 2004 6:41:45 am PDT #6572 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Thanks, Dani! Insent.

Those are cool, deb. (And may I just say how cool it is to have someone who understands enough about the era I'm researching to send me appropriate links? I've got someone in my writers group who's trying to give me a catalog of high Victorian home furnishings and floor plans to help me with the visual details of my settings. Um...no. Makes about as much sense as using 1950's design for a book set aboard the Titanic.)


deborah grabien - Sep 15, 2004 7:15:47 am PDT #6573 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Susan, you need to read Roz's most recent livejournal entry; she's been reading Charles Greville and his take on Wellington. I've been having a ball, discussing the Gordons and Uxbridge at Waterloo. Go look.