Zoe: Jayne. This is something the Captain has to do for himself. Mal: No! No, it's not!

'War Stories'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Topic!Cindy - Sep 06, 2004 2:21:58 am PDT #6400 of 10001
What is even happening?

Oh, deb.


Deena - Sep 06, 2004 6:24:30 am PDT #6401 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Oh, lovely Deb, both of them. That last one is heart-wrenching.


deborah grabien - Sep 06, 2004 7:59:33 am PDT #6402 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Yep. The heart definitely had a bend in it when I wrote that. Next lyrics up will be "Zoo in Heaven", another pissy little song about rock and roll. I sense a theme in my own history. And I love this thread, I do, even though it occurs to me I may be using it in a way that's rather uncomfortably close to creative masturbation, at the moment.

Teppy, new topic today?


Steph L. - Sep 06, 2004 8:08:06 am PDT #6403 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

You know, I was just thinking about that!

I think I am going to go with the bells, bells, bells, bells, bells, bells, bells.

So, challenge #21 (group of people looking down) is closed.

Challenge #22: bells. Silver, Southern, Jingle -- whatever. Have at it!


Amy - Sep 06, 2004 8:20:20 am PDT #6404 of 10001
Because books.

Oh God, Deb, "Ghosts" is just heartbreaking. I'd love to hear this one sung, but it reads beautifully right here like this.

Oooh, bells. Off to think.


deborah grabien - Sep 06, 2004 8:36:53 am PDT #6405 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Notre Dame, 1990

"Chacun doit partir de la tour de cloche, s'il vous plait."

I took my time. Paris was bathed in sunlight, mist rising off the Seine. From up here, the City of Light was mine.

"Chacun doit partir...."

Halfway down the narrow ancient stairway, I understood the danger.

The first bells shook the building, deep-voiced, plangent, angry - a fist to the skull. I covered my ears, tried to run.

The carillon took my feet out from under me. Sitting hard, I bumped down three flights.

Safe in the nave, I blotted blood from my nose, wondering how Quasimodo had survived.


deborah grabien - Sep 06, 2004 9:21:24 am PDT #6406 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

The Cruelest Month

I don't like September.

September, for me, is the month of loss, heartbreak, tragedy, bad news. The year begins its march toward the darkness of winter, the sun begins a retreat, my life falls apart.

Eve died in September; three years old, falling off a high hill. It left me crippled for 18 months, that fall; it left her gone.

My father lost his leg in September, a blood clot, thrombosis, the long slide into death too soon.

N died in September, and history stopped and began again.

September, to me, is bad history, sweet bells jangling out of tune.


erikaj - Sep 06, 2004 12:28:10 pm PDT #6407 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Inspired by recent events:
It takes a second because the doorbell doesn’t ring.My house has electrical gremlins. But the dogs woof and let me know that somebody’s out there. I’m silly and wish I’d made up my face. My God, this is so generous, I expect my brother to come out of somewhere yelling “Psych!”. He always did think that game was funnier than I did. He’s a better bullshitter than me and always knew to put in stuff just weird enough to be real. I’ve won a game show. With smut. And hosts you might really want to kiss. The check’s here.


deborah grabien - Sep 06, 2004 4:00:38 pm PDT #6408 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, damn, erika, you just cheered me up. Perfect.


erikaj - Sep 06, 2004 4:04:16 pm PDT #6409 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I understand those words, but to be fair I hardly ever see them in this order. I used to be black cloud girl, pretty much. Cool! You're welcome, of course...just a small return on your generosity.