Anya: Are you stupid or something? Giles: Allow me to answer that question with a firing.

'Sleeper'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Beverly - Aug 29, 2004 7:44:56 am PDT #6238 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Slipping this one in under the wire. It feels like a cheat, since it's modified from something already written, rather than specifically "written for." But I find if I miss a week due to circumstance, the temptation is to voluntarily skip a week, and that way lies not writing at all. Week 8/16 is also a modified lj entry, but it's there in my own lj, since I missed the deadline in GWW.

Drabble challenge 8/23—"escape" (modified excerpt from an lj entry)

I was dreaming about something pleasant when, as dreams will do, it became an episode of Night Court. Odd, there were no familiar cast members--only an unfamiliar janitor, and the "set" was a public restroom. A woman or young girl had somehow slipped into a pipe and was caught. I don't know whether head-down or not, but suddenly it became imperative to wake up, because if I dreamt anymore I'd discover the trapped person was me. I had to get up, out of bed, because if I fell back asleep I'd dream it again, and it was horribly frightening.


Allyson - Aug 29, 2004 7:56:21 am PDT #6239 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

Beverly, thank you for your editor's skills.


Beverly - Aug 29, 2004 8:15:06 am PDT #6240 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

You're more than welcome. I have a thing about messing with other people's content, but I line-edit pretty well. Thanks for letting me read it.

You're good. You need to be paid for writing as well as you do.


Allyson - Aug 29, 2004 8:16:36 am PDT #6241 of 10001
Wait, is this real-world child support, where the money goes to buy food for the kids, or MRA fantasyland child support where the women just buy Ferraris and cocaine? -Jessica

My ego would also like to thank you.


Kristen - Aug 29, 2004 10:08:58 am PDT #6242 of 10001

I have a thing about messing with other people's content, but I line-edit pretty well.

I'm the opposite. I can suggest restructuring or reworking but I suck at the details.

I suppose that's why I am forever finding typos in my own work months after the fact.


Jesse - Aug 29, 2004 2:51:49 pm PDT #6243 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

Nah, Kristen, I'm way better at editing other people's stuff -- my own, I know what it's supposed to say, so in my head, it does!


victor infante - Aug 29, 2004 3:35:28 pm PDT #6244 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Hi all. Just bopping in to pimp a friend's book:

Barbara DeMarco Barrett--an old, dear friend of mine and the person who knows more about writing than anyone else I know, and let's face it, I know a lot of people--finally has her book on writing out, "Pen on Fire."

Everyone knows I sniff at writing books, but Barbara's the real deal. Visit her Web site.

End of commercial announcement.


erikaj - Aug 29, 2004 4:28:29 pm PDT #6245 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Oh, Victor, congrats to you and Thessaly on the award!


victor infante - Aug 29, 2004 4:30:03 pm PDT #6246 of 10001
To understand what happened at the diner, we shall use Mr. Papaya! This is upsetting because he's the friendliest of fruits.

Thank ya. We're both still bouncy about it.


erikaj - Aug 29, 2004 4:31:43 pm PDT #6247 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I'm not surprised.