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The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Polter-Cow - Aug 17, 2004 8:48:36 pm PDT #6082 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Yes, 'tis I. I have returned to read drabbles and not bother to write any of my own.


Connie Neil - Aug 17, 2004 8:49:30 pm PDT #6083 of 10001
brillig

And I just caught up in Bitches. t hug Welcome home, Prodigal Cow.


Steph L. - Aug 18, 2004 5:20:16 am PDT #6084 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

So....are people hating this week's drabble topic? I can change it.


Connie Neil - Aug 18, 2004 5:30:38 am PDT #6085 of 10001
brillig

No, it just showed up late in the day. I'm mulling my tummy.

Mmm, mulled wine ...


Susan W. - Aug 18, 2004 5:56:28 am PDT #6086 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I skipped. I skimmed. And all I have to say is, Susan rooooocks.

Hey, PC!

t feels all flattered and pleased


deborah grabien - Aug 18, 2004 7:02:26 am PDT #6087 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Not hating it. I just have an emotionally knotted tum, so I'm not tackling it until it untangles itself.

Hey, Cow - welcome back.


Connie Neil - Aug 18, 2004 7:17:07 am PDT #6088 of 10001
brillig

Where do the Pennies Go?

You were just tasting the penny. Maybe comparing the taste of copper with how blood is described in books as to how it tastes when you suck the finger you just cut. It happens.

Thinking about copper and things, and the penny slips further back--then down.

You swallow in surprise. And it's too late.

Not choking, not in pain. But ... there's a penny in your stomach. Tell someone? What could they do?

You remember swallowed gum--ok, and that pebble when you were really little. Never seen again.

But is there a pile of stuff in the bottom of your stomach? If you listened, would you hear a clink?


erikaj - Aug 18, 2004 8:10:01 am PDT #6089 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I wasn’t late, but Tommy was way ahead of me. Fifteen minutes went by. I picked at some toast. He was eating stuff that I couldn’t face till much later in the day.
“Ugh...just looking at that I feel my arteries occluding.” Bacon, sausage, the usual suspects.

The place was a dump. Not fifties retro, actual fifties, from when the motels and motor lodges around here were for tourists, not people looking for whatever kind of...gratification they could find in an anonymous room for an hour...the place across the street still proudly advertised its airconditioning in blue letters with painted white “frost” on them, which around here these days strikes me like saying “Indoor plumbing inside!” but must have been quite a draw back when.
“Tommy, if you wow this guy with atmosphere, he might not take us seriously.” The white Formica on my table had a greyish tinge. I pondered the millions of cigarettes and hamburgers that brought about this development and felt time pressing in on me for a minute or two. I shivered and I didn’t know why.

“So, you’re a dietician now, too. And one of those decorator gals.” He was feeling testy cause he couldn’t smoke.He’d quit the previous month, and though he was past the physical urges, the emotional pull and the pull of habit was very strong.

“This guy’s probably like you...seen too many movies. He might think this *is* atmosphere."

”Have some juice at least...cut the grease.”I urged him.

“All that’s keeping me together is the grease. I thought you knew.
” But I noticed he asked for a large oj anyway. But it’s against the rules of our relationship to mention it.

“Tommy, what if Pam heard you talk like that?” Ok, so maybe I didn’t feel good about Pam any more, but she always put a goofy soft look on her dad’s face that I wondered if any man ever had about me. I doubted it very seriously. Even my client who tracked me down through downtown Phoenix seemed to consider an appointment with me a suggestion. And I took a personal day for this;lied and implied some kind of personal situation so nobody would ask too many questions. The lie made my heart beat faster and filled me with both pleasure and shame, the residues of both still pulsing in my chest. No wonder I couldn’t eat.


erikaj - Aug 18, 2004 10:17:52 am PDT #6090 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Beverly, insent...I found a way to share AND keep my promise. I hope you like it.


Beverly - Aug 18, 2004 2:05:08 pm PDT #6091 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Got it erika. I may not have a chance to give it any real attention tonight though. I'll try. And thanks!