Jayne (Husband): Oh, I think you might wanna reconsider that last part. See, I married me a powerful ugly creature. Mal (Wife): How can you say that? How can you shame me in front of new people? Jayne (Husband): If I could make you purtier, I would. Mal (Wife): You are not the man I met a year ago.

'Our Mrs. Reynolds'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


§ ita § - Aug 10, 2004 7:04:48 am PDT #5991 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

He doesn't know how close he comes each time he shuts his eyes. Her fingers float over fluttering pulse and dance on warm exhale.

She totals his day...the snapping, the smiling, the hurting and the healing. She totals hers...the stresses and releases, all her frustrations and accomplishments.

Her hand closes just a little on his neck, and in his trust he doesn't stir. The power is electric in her spine, tingling through her limbs.

He laughs in sleep and mumbles her name.

"Mmmph." Her grunt propels her onto her side, shutting him out with her back. Tomorrow is another day.


Nutty - Aug 10, 2004 7:38:25 am PDT #5992 of 10001
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

Can't think of a title. Anyway, unlike the one about executing soldiers, this one actually applies to me. And is 101 words. ---

I am walking down the street. An SUV, black with black windows, the back one on the driver's side lowered for the quivering nose of a golden retriever. It nods forward, head and shoulders out into the breeze. The car is traveling quickly past me.

Coming opposite, another SUV, also black. They seem too close. Every time, I see the cars swooping past each other, the dog heedless, tongue waggling -- and that sickening crush.

The cars move on, each in its own direction. I keep walking, head down. The dog has never yet been killed. I see it every time.


deborah grabien - Aug 10, 2004 7:57:15 am PDT #5993 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

(short break away from everyone's amazing drabbles to crow)

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

I have galleys! A dozen bound galleys of "Famous Flower"! They've got Marina Drukman's original idea for the cover (since modified) and "Jacket in Progress" in a banner across the front, but I. have. achieved. galleys!

(bounce)

For some reason, it always nails me at this point. I feel like Victor Frankenstein, only with my new book: "It's ALIIIIIIVE!"

(sorry. needed to bounce. as you were.)


Beverly - Aug 10, 2004 8:11:12 am PDT #5994 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Life, as a rule, provides us with so few genuine opportunities to bounce. So please, bounce all you like, and give us a chance to bask in your reflected joy.

(Bouncing with Deb)


Astarte - Aug 10, 2004 8:21:08 am PDT #5995 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

Squuuuueeeeeeee!!!!!!!!

I can't wait for this one to come out. I'll be pimping it to everybody. It's such a great read.


deborah grabien - Aug 10, 2004 8:35:53 am PDT #5996 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Bev, juliana and Betsy are actually mentioned in full in the acknowledgments for this one; Matty's acknowledgments list is likely to be waaaaaaaaay longer.

Astarte, you know what? I'm asking anyone who's planning on buying it to ask at least one chain bookstore near them to order it. Make that barnes and Noble or Borders or Dalton get off its ass and stock me up, damnit.

What do we want? BEST SELLER!

When do want it? BY CHRISTMAS!

Why do we want it? BUFFISTA TUSCAN COMPOUND!


Astarte - Aug 10, 2004 9:05:21 am PDT #5997 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

I can do that.

BookPeople B&N Borders all in easy reach. Hmm.

I've pre-ordered mine on Amazon already.


ChiKat - Aug 10, 2004 9:09:08 am PDT #5998 of 10001
That man was going to shank me. Over an omelette. Two eggs and a slice of government cheese. Is that what my life is worth?

Woot, deb!! That is so very cool!

And, here's my very first drabble (been lurking for awhile):

His lips felt soft on her neck. Did he know what that did to her? How her heart thumped and her legs went limp? He pushed her up against the refrigerator with gentle force, pinning her wrists to the door up near her shoulders. Oh dear god.

She could feel his teeth nibbling the skin over her collar bone and his tongue lapping the base of her throat. Her head spun as her breathing grew shallow and her vision blurred. Heat emanated from her chest and radiated outward to the rest of her body.

She tried to say, “Oh my god. Yes. Please,” but speech failed her completely and the only sounds she could make were low guttural syllables. Finally, her knees buckled as she tightened in orgasm. Did he even know what he had done to her? Just by kissing her neck?


deborah grabien - Aug 10, 2004 9:09:38 am PDT #5999 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Lalala, let's clue in the bookstores.

Because the bookstores is where people browse. And they can't browse and buy what isn't there. And if they're asked, they'll generally order a few copies.

(grabs pompoms)

"Gimme a BEST! (best!) Gimme a SELLER! (seller!) What's that spell?

Place in the Tuscan hills to run away from the NeoCons!


deborah grabien - Aug 10, 2004 9:10:41 am PDT #6000 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Heh. ChiKat, we both went for the most enjoyable definition of "near death experience"...