You know, I just... I woke up, and I looked in the mirror, and I thought, hey, what's with all the sin? I need to change. I'm... I'm dirty. I'm, I'm bad with the... sex and the envy and that, that loud music us kids listen to nowadays.

Buffy ,'Lessons'


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Gris - Jul 27, 2004 1:04:06 am PDT #5897 of 10001
Hey. New board.

We have a coffeehouse on the Caltech campus called the Red Door Café. If I don't manage to work that in somehow, I'll be very sad.


Liese S. - Jul 27, 2004 2:28:37 am PDT #5898 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

You do more than I, deb, as my injury was utterly minor. Rendering that piece more fiction than not.

But fret hand injuries sure are scary, so I extrapolated the (thankfully unnecessary) fear.


deborah grabien - Jul 27, 2004 6:51:21 am PDT #5899 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

You extrapolated well. There was desolation in that paragraph.


Liese S. - Jul 27, 2004 8:27:17 am PDT #5900 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Thank you. It's terrifying to me.

We know a fellow, a programmer by trade and musician by heart, like us. He was sitting at his pc one day and lost his hearing completely in a span of about ten minutes. A virus or something, turns out. A writer friend of mine, mother of a close friend, is going blind.

Equally terrifying to me. To lose something so inherent to the artist's sensibilities. It's not just the injury or disease. It's the fear of loss of creativity.


erikaj - Jul 27, 2004 8:57:13 am PDT #5901 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Wrod.


deborah grabien - Jul 27, 2004 9:06:40 am PDT #5902 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Liese, I actually drabbled about my own injury, in an earlier drabble challenge.

It's scary stuff. I was purely a musician at the time and my hands weren't recognisable as such.


Liese S. - Jul 27, 2004 9:12:34 am PDT #5903 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Yeah, I think I remember your other drabble. It's all so striking at such a basic level.


Lyra Jane - Jul 27, 2004 12:07:50 pm PDT #5904 of 10001
Up with the sun

Nutty, Kaspar Hauser fascinates me. There are some brief samples of his writing in the book Lost Girls and Wild Boys (or a similar title; it's a recent book about feral children). There is some stiltedness and a few odd phrasiings, but it's hard to tell how much of it is due to the abuse and loss of language he suffered and how much of it is innate in writing translated from 19th-century German.

I have been entirely convinced he was a fake and entirely convinced his story was real, and am currently somewhere in the middle.


Beverly - Jul 28, 2004 7:37:00 am PDT #5905 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

#16--Doors (doorways, door frames), red

She paid no attention to the lights that flashed their sequences, the ones that hadn't burned or shorted out. The helmet curtailed her peripheral vision, and as she passed, they ceased to exist anyway. The sound of her breath was all she could hear. The lights flashed silently. But the hatch hissed as its pneumatics worked, sluggishly, to lever it up. Instruments in her suit sampled, formulated, calculated. If she mixed suit air with the local, she might acclimate easier than gulping a full lungful when her oxygen ran out. Outside, her new horizon, under a red sky.


erikaj - Jul 28, 2004 8:22:57 am PDT #5906 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Good one, Beverly. Mine's girly, this time.
The doorway isn’t wide enough for both of us to be in the bathroom at once. And, even though we’re both going out tonight, she’s first. She always is. She’s like...the alpha, or something.
I stop myself from picturing some British commentator narrating the social structure of homo sapiens cripplensis , with some difficulty, considering all the anthro this semester.(We’re still working on the tool use thing. In a pinch, you can capture an errant birth control pill with a spoon though. I think that counts.)
Not that the less dominant female doesn’t have her uses. Stephanie turns her freshly lipsticked mouth to me. “Ok?” she says.

Like I know. “Um, too red.”

She blots, puts on the pink one
. “Go like that,” I say, smacking my own bare lips together in what suddenly feels like a provocative gesture. I’d never really noticed before, and I’ve been messing with makeup since I was twelve.