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Connie Neil - Jul 26, 2004 12:58:34 pm PDT #5876 of 10001
brillig

drabble

The viewing for my father at the funeral home. Two days of socially required masochism. I wander, unable to cope with my family's grief, unwilling to have my own on display.

At the end of the hallway is a sliding door. It's been closed, but now it's slightly open. The curiosity I inherited from my father sends me to look through.

Not an office. Metal table. Linoleum floor. Counters with bottles and jars. Cabinets with medical instruments.

"Can I help you?"

The voice is kind, but I blush scarlet anyway. One of the funeral directors, recognizing me as Family.

"I--was just--"

He puts his hand on the door. "If you'd like to see--"

"No!"

He hesitates,nods, and closes the door.


deborah grabien - Jul 26, 2004 1:04:06 pm PDT #5877 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Whoa. Connie, tres powerful.


Connie Neil - Jul 26, 2004 1:06:25 pm PDT #5878 of 10001
brillig

I've been having nightmares about that door for 20 years.


deborah grabien - Jul 26, 2004 1:12:01 pm PDT #5879 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

You must have really been freaked during "The Body". I'm so sorry. That's one of those horror moments and when they show up suddenly? Ugh.


Connie Neil - Jul 26, 2004 1:17:34 pm PDT #5880 of 10001
brillig

I've seen "The Body" once, finding several reasons to find out what was going on in the kitchen.


Connie Neil - Jul 26, 2004 1:20:11 pm PDT #5881 of 10001
brillig

I should have let him show me the room, it would probably have helped my long-term neuroses, but 20-year-old me was not that well-adjusted.


deborah grabien - Jul 26, 2004 1:22:06 pm PDT #5882 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Nutty - Jul 26, 2004 1:52:01 pm PDT #5883 of 10001
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

Kaspar Hauser's Last Letter

I cannot fault you, my dear Benefactor, for allowing me freedom from a guard. I disdain even now the thought of any restraint, a chaperon in the park no less than the lock on my childhood prison's door. Now all chains are loosed: the knots in my red ribbons come undone: and the ties I strove to bind, to memory and family, to birth – alas!

The Almighty demands my presence; I must beg your forgiveness for leaving unread any reply you have sent to my last missive. Lord Stanhope, farewell. In all things, you have been no less kind to me than if I had been heir to the House of Baden.


deborah grabien - Jul 26, 2004 1:55:43 pm PDT #5884 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Nutty, interesting take. I don't know nearly enough about him, beyond the basics - had he attained that level of eloquence by the time he died?


Nutty - Jul 26, 2004 1:58:08 pm PDT #5885 of 10001
"Mister Spock is on his fanny, sir. Reports heavy damage."

Yes and no. Yes, he learned how to read and write, and was acclaimed to be "remembering" to speak, instead of learning it for the first time, since he learned so quickly; no, I haven't found any samples of his actual writing, although he did write many letters to Lord Stanhope.

(Stanhope was not so assiduous about writing back.)