Can't even shout, Can't even cry. The Gentlemen are coming by. Looking in windows, knocking on doors. They need to take seven, and they might take yours. Can't call to mom, can't say a word. You're gonna die screaming but you won't be heard.

Dream Girl ,'Bring On The Night'


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deborah grabien - Jul 20, 2004 3:02:03 pm PDT #5802 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

ita, you just took me right back to the Rock Against Racism free concerts in South London in the late seventies, with the Clash and Elvis Costello. And Joe Strummer waving one foot and yelling, "Don't let the National Front make you think everyone wearin' Docs is a fucking Nazi!"


Amy - Jul 20, 2004 7:02:56 pm PDT #5803 of 10001
Because books.

Another interesting challenge! Mine comes, kind of, from Saturday's NY Post, which mentioned Hemingway's famous micro-fiction, which is the notice posted in the drabble.

  • **

The notice is posted to the bulletin board outside the market. “For sale: baby shoes, never worn.”

She hefts her daughter on one skinny hip. She’s come looking for a room, or even a roommate. They need a place to crash, and the peanut toddles over the boardwalk just fine on her sturdy bare feet. A guitar would be nice, though, or a few books.

She wonders what happened to that other baby. Dead? Never born? Maybe neither—maybe she was as happy as her little monkey, sand between her toes and the waves a cool kiss on her ankles.

  • **

Off to read the others...


Amy - Jul 20, 2004 7:07:10 pm PDT #5804 of 10001
Because books.

They're all so good this week!

It's like some LSD-addled exercise in spatial reality

This cracked me up. And the other one, Deb, the courtroom room, was perfect.


Susan W. - Jul 21, 2004 11:25:15 am PDT #5805 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

I've just drafted an email to let those friends and family who haven't yet heard I'm a freelance writer know what I do. Is it OK if I post it here for feedback? I just want to make sure it's not too obnoxious and spammy.


Ginger - Jul 21, 2004 11:30:41 am PDT #5806 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Those are really hard e-mails to write, Susan. I say post away.


Susan W. - Jul 21, 2004 11:36:00 am PDT #5807 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

OK, here goes:

Dear Friends and Family—

I apologize in advance for sending out a mass email like this, and I promise not to make a habit of it in the future.

As some of you know, I’m a writer. I did some freelancing for one of the local weeklies back when I lived in Philadelphia, and I’ve sold a few magazine articles, including this one, which appeared in Marriage Partnership last winter: [link] Also, I’ve finished a 100,000-word novel, and I’m working on my second while I search for a publisher for the first.

Now that Dylan and I have a baby, I’ve decided to make my writing more than a hobby by becoming self-employed as a freelancer. I specialize in writing and editing resumes and cover letters. While most resume writers focus on managerial and executive clients, I like to help entry- and mid-level workers take the next step up in their careers by giving them application packages that stand out in the crowd.

I also do general freelance commercial writing, including press releases, nonprofit fundraising materials, newsletters, ad copy, and proofreading/copyediting.

While I’m not going to make a habit of spamming my friends and relatives with advertising, I thought I’d send this one-time email to let y’all know what I’m doing. If you’re interested or know anyone who might be, I have a website at [link]

And on a purely personal note, if you want to see the latest baby pictures, Annabel has a blog at [link]

--Susan


Ginger - Jul 21, 2004 11:52:09 am PDT #5808 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

My only thought, Susan, is that I think you can just drop the first paragraph. You say later that this is a one-time e-mail. I think it's a perfectly reasonable letter to send and I don't think you need to apologize for it.


erikaj - Jul 21, 2004 11:53:28 am PDT #5809 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Yay...I think that is perfect, Susan. BTW, I'm getting serious use out of your old writer's market this week.


Susan W. - Jul 21, 2004 12:12:28 pm PDT #5810 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Thanks, Ginger and erika!


deborah grabien - Jul 21, 2004 1:48:18 pm PDT #5811 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Yup - first paragraph not needed. Otherwise? Looks good.