I just liked her flat "I did it, yeah, whatever, the evil fuck had it coming, could you at least get the details right?"
Reminds me, P-C, curling up with your thing tomorrow morning, hopefully.
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I just liked her flat "I did it, yeah, whatever, the evil fuck had it coming, could you at least get the details right?"
Reminds me, P-C, curling up with your thing tomorrow morning, hopefully.
Bwah! to deb.
And I loved ita's fairy tale reference.
Let's see what I can do with this one....
Remember the girl who got scooped up by a press gang in 1799 or so in the key scene drabble from a few weeks ago? Well, she's back. I can't wait to finish my current novel so I can tell her story....
She can still wear her old dresses, but not the shoes. Five years in men’s boots or scrambling barefoot in the rigging have left her feet too wide and coarse for the silken dancing slippers and dainty kid half-boots her girl-self wore in that distant former life. The maid is dismayed, but Elizabeth shrugs. It’s not as if she could possibly pick up a splinter or even a speck of dirt going barefoot in a house as immaculate as Hardingstone Place. But the maid is unyielding. And so Lady Elizabeth Gordon, late master’s mate of HMS Hermione, goes down to breakfast with her husband and her brother clad in a dress half a decade out of date and the second housemaid’s best shoes.
Oh, hell, Susan. That's perfect period, that is.
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Thanks!
Very nice shoes drabbles.
In honor of having finally caught up in this thread (Yay! Fairy Tales! Murder! Brrr, ita!) I have a drabble!
Shoes
Our therapist is laughing at me as I tell her about the pediatric orthopedist and how he says the baby shouldn’t wear shoes unless they’re very soft-soled and then only when necessary for protection. I’m so excited, I babble, “Babies with poor vision use their feet, like eyes, to provide information about their world.”
She’s still laughing as she says, “I know that, but, I’ve never seen any of you in shoes anyway, so I didn’t think to tell you about it.”
This is true. My feet can’t breathe in shoes. My baby’s feet breathe and see for him, too.
Love that, Deena.
Thanks, Astarte. I think maybe I should have named it the anti-shoe. Why can't I drabble fiction? S'weird. At least I got something out this week.
Deena, that's a beautiful, beautiful take.