Kaylee: So, uh, how come you don't care where you're going? Book: 'Cause how you get there is the worthier part.

'Serenity'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Amy - Jul 14, 2004 11:33:40 am PDT #5693 of 10001
Because books.

There are things that don't even make sense, sometimes, that I read for the sound of the language.

For no good reason *, I just reread most of Mr. and Mrs. Bo Jo Jones (which, if you haven't read it, do, immediately), which is a book I've loved since I was a kid.

  • Actually part of the reason is probably getting out and sorting through all our books in the move, which involved discovering ones that had been packed away due to lack of shelf space.

Her writing isn't "literary" or especially poetic, really, it's just very, very real. Her voice is so right on, even today, and yet it was written in 1967. The narrator's voice is so believeable, so immediate, and the way she describes some things just kills me.

Actually, here's a passage that is just flat out lovely, I think, as well as incredibly moving, without ever being graphic. She's watching her husband sleep after they've argued. (This is a story of two teenagers who get married.)

"...He looked, I thought, terribly young and defenseless and sweet.

As I leaned above him the baby lurched inside me and for a moment the baby inside me and the youth on the bed seemed one and the same and I somehow responsible for them both.

I lay down beside Bo Jo and whispered to him that I was sorry. I'm not sure he heard the words, but something got through to him for slowly his eyes opened. He looked at me, dazed and guileless with sleep, and this time when he put his arms around me I was there. I was with it and he knew it."

(She's mentioned earlier that sometimes when they make love, he seems to "go away" somewhere, leaving her behind.)

There are spots like this throughout the book. Just perfect, dead-on little gems that capture a feeling or a moment so perfectly. Despite occasional references to hippies and Harry Belafonte (and coffee for a dime) the book doesn't feel dated at all to me. Well, to qualify that, it doesn't if you imagine that lots more pregnant teens today would choose marriage over other options.


erikaj - Jul 14, 2004 1:28:46 pm PDT #5694 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Hey, all, "my" magazine came out today! And my article is in the same magazine with a Barbara Ehrenreich article. This makes me really chuffed.


Steph L. - Jul 14, 2004 1:30:44 pm PDT #5695 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

Which one, erika? MouthMag?


erikaj - Jul 14, 2004 1:33:36 pm PDT #5696 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Yep. Of course, it's an Ehrenreich reprint, but go team lefty cred. They owe me some copies, though.


Beverly - Jul 14, 2004 1:33:58 pm PDT #5697 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Go, erika!

And AmyLiz, yes, I can't think of any actual concrete examples right now, but I have experienced what you mentioned. It's wonderful when that happens.


Steph L. - Jul 14, 2004 1:35:31 pm PDT #5698 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

You fucking RULE, woman!

I still think you should query magazines like BUST and Bitch and maybe Ms., because the topic of owning your body is so salient to all women, and your perspective on it is just beautiful.


Amy - Jul 14, 2004 1:36:33 pm PDT #5699 of 10001
Because books.

Clapping wildly for erika...

Bravo!


Beverly - Jul 14, 2004 1:37:57 pm PDT #5700 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Seconding Teppy, erika. See me nodding wildly?


erikaj - Jul 14, 2004 1:39:55 pm PDT #5701 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Yeah, I think I should too. I got a million of 'em, as far as that goes. You know what I forgot? A bio. That was dumb, huh?


Beverly - Jul 14, 2004 1:40:52 pm PDT #5702 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Okay--see there, what happened there? I was going to post "See me nodding madly?" and had just read AmyLiz's "clapping wildly..." And what I read went down on the page.

It's how I'll fasten on a "word of the day" when I'm writing. I go back later and find the same word five or six times in three or four pages...that's how I can tell all those pages were written in the same session.