Hey! What do you two think you're doing? Fightin' at a time like this. You'll use up all the air!

Jayne ,'Out Of Gas'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Steph L. - Jun 21, 2004 2:40:27 pm PDT #5366 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

I am a dimwit! After asking for drabble suggestions, I chose one....in my brain. And forgot to post it. I am a Tep of Very Little Brain some days.

Anyway....the key paragraph challenge is now closed.

We're up to challenge #11, which is almost 3 months of weekly drabbles! I am SO pleased that people are still enjoying it!

I intend to use all the suggested challenges sooner or later, but since my moderator-ship is also a dictatorship, I'm making this week's challenge topic silence. Because, frankly, I have an idea for it, and I haven't been drabbling lately.

So there it is. Silence. Actual words are required in the drabble (Polter-Cow, I'm looking at YOU, baby). Go to it.


erikaj - Jun 21, 2004 2:45:14 pm PDT #5367 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Silence. Very come as I'm not for yours truly.(No shit! Really?)


deborah grabien - Jun 21, 2004 3:02:59 pm PDT #5368 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

London 1978

The last thing she remembered hearing was a crackle, a spitting, something that might have been firecrackers. They were distant, then not so distant, then closeby.

There was, in her aural sense memory, also a sick squealing, and an angry whining. It might have been tires on wet pavement; it might have been something else.

Now she sat in the London casualty ward with a dozen other passersby. The doctor held up a handwritten sign: "A bomb exploded near you, outside Harrod's. Don't worry. Your hearing loss is temporary."

If there's any justice in the world, she thinks, he'll be right.


Polter-Cow - Jun 21, 2004 3:07:06 pm PDT #5369 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

That's rather evocative. I think it was the doctor with the handwritten sign that suddenly transported me back to...oh, weird. I went back to, like, 1878 instead of 1978. It felt so Victorian. Or maybe I always imagine London as Victorian.


deborah grabien - Jun 21, 2004 3:09:59 pm PDT #5370 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Just a true vignette. My friend Jenny was outside Harrod's when an IRA bomb went off, and they called her work contact number, and I went to make sure she was OK.

She was very cross about the whole thing, after she stopped being scared shitless.


Connie Neil - Jun 21, 2004 3:27:44 pm PDT #5371 of 10001
brillig

Down the Cardiac Care hallway towards Hubby's room. The door is open, but the room's dark. Maybe he's asleep.

In other rooms monitors beep, oxygen feeds hiss, the evening TV news speaks. The sounds fade as I approach his door. Nothing from his room. Not the triple-beep of the blood oxygen sensor announcing a drop, nor his sleepy swearing as the alarm wakes him and reminds him to breathe. Not the steady beep that tracks his heartbeat.

Freshly made bed. Faintest rush of air from the ceiling vent.

"Where is he?" I snap at the nurse.

She cringes. "He went for a walk."


deborah grabien - Jun 21, 2004 3:29:16 pm PDT #5372 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, good one.


Connie Neil - Jun 21, 2004 3:30:24 pm PDT #5373 of 10001
brillig

Too many fucking times I've made that walk down that hall. The nurses recognize me. At least half the time Hubby's gone AWOL.


Ginger - Jun 21, 2004 3:58:29 pm PDT #5374 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Nice, Connie.

At some point, I think it would be interesting to have a drabble based on spam. For example, I just got spam with this subject line: "fairy cigars of 5882."


erikaj - Jun 21, 2004 4:31:06 pm PDT #5375 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Silence is a gift to my mother, a relief from a busy day of noise and kids. But it makes me uncomfortable.Meditation was hard to learn at first because the mental chatter and commercial jingles overwhelmed any attempt at quiet contemplation for about three months. There are few feelings lower than lying about your meditation experience, but I would, rather than admit that my brain sang commercial jingles from twenty years ago to itself. When things are too quiet, I find myself busy with thoughts I’d rather avoid. I don’t know why...it’s not as though I have a tortured past.