The Great Write Way
A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.
This week's theme is making me very hungry. Want berries now.
I was mulling over this for the blue theme but didn't finish in time - fortunately, it works for both.
You see them in the supermarket nearly every day of the year: enormous, neon-bright blueberries, soft and mealy. Beside them the wild ones seem small and unimpressive, midnight-blue globes with a dusty grey sheen. Their tart-sweet taste brings back red granite cliffs and cold rust-tinged water, thick drifts of bronze pine needles soft underfoot, but prickly on knees.
I could never decide whether to eat or harvest first. In the end it was one in my mouth, one in the pail, alternating as fast as I could. My tongue and fingertips were stained navy long before the pail was full.
Dani, that made me ache a bit, in a good memory sort of way.
And in fact, the blueberry tree that Penny B sent me has wonderful little dusky blue globes all over it. ABout two weeks, and they're mine all mine.
All the fruit drabbles are making me hungry. But for some reason, a bad week at work inspired mine:
In my world, they mean magic, witchcraft, and temptation. They are a symbol of other worlds, imagination, and decadence. I’ve looked for lipstick and velvet with that depth and clarity of red for years, never quite finding it.
None of this, however, is what springs to mind when I see them stacked in an uneven pyramid in the cafeteria one day. All I can think of then is this company’s uncomfortable similarities to Hell, and that I don’t dare eat one here; what if I’m forced to stay?
Pomegranates should not appear at Microsoft.
Jilli, I already giggled like a loon in the lj entry.
Jeepers, Kristin.
That's - damn, that's a corker.
Thank you so, Deb. I write a lot of poetry by share little of it. High praise from you just made my night.
I'm going grayish on much of the board (so much work to do in the next two weeks as school lurches to a close), but I plan to keep up here. I just love this thread.
There's a fruit drabble about my Gram bouncing around in my head, but it hasn't materialized yet. It will soon.
Memories of homemade peach cobbler are making my mouth water, now.
Also, Jilli, I love yours. Makes me laugh out loud.
She closes the distance as she sees the car slow. She moves quickly, brightly coloured cottons against cocoa skin. Her smile curls up her face, but stops short of eyes glittering with calculation.
They follow standard roadside protocol - her lips caress each syllable as her hands move slowly over rounded flesh.
"Is firm, you know, Sah," she croons. "And sweet like you like it."
My father nods, gesturing with the money. "In the back."
I reach through the window and take the bag of oranges from her. I've never been to the same fruitstand twice, never had a different experience.
At first, I thought the last line was contradictory, but I think I understand now. I like it.
I'm awed by all the fruit this week's topic is producing. Heh.
And Kristin's poem is thought-provoking.