Played with Kaylee. Sun came out, and I walked on my feet and heard with my ears. I ate the bits, the bits stayed down, and I work. I function like I'm a girl. I hate it because I know it'll go away. The sun goes dark and chaos has come again. Bits. Fluids. What am I?!

River ,'War Stories'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Theodosia - Jan 23, 2003 11:46:13 am PST #485 of 10001
'we all walk this earth feeling we are frauds. The trick is to be grateful and hope the caper doesn't end any time soon"

Time in drama is a very malleable aspect. My friend Adam-Troy Castro did a wonderful SF/action novella ("The Wonder Drug") where about 3/4s of the story takes place in about a minute and a half.

Another writer friend of mine points out that in certain kinds of story, conversation is the action.


Betsy HP - Jan 23, 2003 11:47:00 am PST #486 of 10001
If I only had a brain...

Mine, for instance. Left to myself, I write radio plays. Then I have to go back and edit in the other four senses.


Susan W. - Jan 23, 2003 11:49:02 am PST #487 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Heh. My 7000 words are mostly dialogue, with connecting bits as needed to get my protagonist from point A to point B so she can talk to someone else. I have to go back in and perk up the action and description at some point. My rough drafts read a bit like shooting scripts, sans clever asides.


Connie Neil - Jan 23, 2003 12:27:33 pm PST #488 of 10001
brillig

I am dialogue's bitch. One thing I love about my unabridged Count of Monte Cristo is the pages of snarky dialogue between two characters. Though every now and then I have to count up to the last identifier so I can keep track of who's saying what. I'll go "Wait, I thought he was a Bonapartist, why is he saying those things? Oh, I see, I lost track, the Bonapartist is over there, this is the Royalist. OK."

The good days are when I look up and realize that I've put out nine pages of new stuff in one day, and I didn't have to think once. As opposed to the last few days, when I hit a wall mid-scene and it's not moving. Kind of like having an SUV that can't get over a barrier. Rev, rev, rev, and all you're doing is burning rubber and the clutch.


Alibelle - Jan 23, 2003 12:35:27 pm PST #489 of 10001
Apart from sports, "my secret favorite thing on earth is ketchup. I will put ketchup on anything. But it has to be Heinz." - my husband, Michael Vartan

I've only got a bit over 6,000 words in mine, and until I hit a groove, getting one word out at a time is super hard. I envy all you guys who can just churn out massive works. I'm definitely more of a novella type, though I am getting better at longer stuff. And I agree that dialogue is definitely the most fun to write.


Connie Neil - Jan 23, 2003 12:36:46 pm PST #490 of 10001
brillig

all you guys who can just churn out massive works

Churn. Churn, she says.

giggling hysterically as I tug on the chain to my muse, who's feeling like Moby Dick on the end of a fishing pole


Susan W. - Jan 23, 2003 12:40:10 pm PST #491 of 10001
Good Trouble and Righteous Fights

Envy me when I actually finish this thing.


Am-Chau Yarkona - Jan 23, 2003 12:48:11 pm PST #492 of 10001
I bop to Wittgenstein. -- Nutty

dialogue is definitely the most fun to write

Fun! Fun? There are days when it's harder than anything else, when they all go dumb as if someone had ripped thier lips off. Well, mine do.


Connie Neil - Jan 23, 2003 12:50:40 pm PST #493 of 10001
brillig

poke, poke "Talk to each other, dammit!"


Alibelle - Jan 23, 2003 12:54:05 pm PST #494 of 10001
Apart from sports, "my secret favorite thing on earth is ketchup. I will put ketchup on anything. But it has to be Heinz." - my husband, Michael Vartan

I've never had my characters all shut up at once. I do my best to get them to slow down and wait their turns so everyone gets his or her chance to be heard, and of course that causes them to get huffy because, really, who wants to be reprimanded? But yes. Dialogue is fun.

as if someone had ripped thier lips off.

This sounds like an interesting story.