Time in drama is a very malleable aspect. My friend Adam-Troy Castro did a wonderful SF/action novella ("The Wonder Drug") where about 3/4s of the story takes place in about a minute and a half.
Another writer friend of mine points out that in certain kinds of story, conversation
is
the action.
Mine, for instance. Left to myself, I write radio plays. Then I have to go back and edit in the other four senses.
Heh. My 7000 words are mostly dialogue, with connecting bits as needed to get my protagonist from point A to point B so she can talk to someone else. I have to go back in and perk up the action and description at some point. My rough drafts read a bit like shooting scripts, sans clever asides.
I am dialogue's bitch. One thing I love about my unabridged
Count of Monte Cristo
is the pages of snarky dialogue between two characters. Though every now and then I have to count up to the last identifier so I can keep track of who's saying what. I'll go "Wait, I thought he was a Bonapartist, why is he saying those things? Oh, I see, I lost track, the Bonapartist is over there, this is the Royalist. OK."
The good days are when I look up and realize that I've put out nine pages of new stuff in one day, and I didn't have to think once. As opposed to the last few days, when I hit a wall mid-scene and it's not moving. Kind of like having an SUV that can't get over a barrier. Rev, rev, rev, and all you're doing is burning rubber and the clutch.
I've only got a bit over 6,000 words in mine, and until I hit a groove, getting one word out at a time is super hard. I envy all you guys who can just churn out massive works. I'm definitely more of a novella type, though I am getting better at longer stuff. And I agree that dialogue is definitely the most fun to write.
all you guys who can just churn out massive works
Churn. Churn, she says.
giggling hysterically as I tug on the chain to my muse, who's feeling like Moby Dick on the end of a fishing pole
Envy me when I actually finish this thing.
dialogue is definitely the most fun to write
Fun! Fun? There are days when it's harder than anything else, when they all go dumb as if someone had ripped thier lips off. Well, mine do.
poke, poke
"Talk to each other, dammit!"
I've never had my characters all shut up at once. I do my best to get them to slow down and wait their turns so everyone gets his or her chance to be heard, and of course that causes them to get huffy because, really, who wants to be reprimanded? But yes. Dialogue is fun.
as if someone had ripped thier lips off.
This sounds like an interesting story.