Mal: Does.. um.. does this seem kind of tight? Kaylee: Shows off your backside.

'Shindig'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Jesse - May 25, 2004 4:32:16 pm PDT #4801 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

I love all of these drabbles, the bloody and the sweet. For some reason, I want to write about my grandfather again. I was going to do a "hands" one about my grandmother, too. Maybe I should be writing more about them.


dcp - May 25, 2004 5:21:14 pm PDT #4802 of 10001
The more I learn, the more I realize how little I know.

Steph L. - May 26, 2004 5:25:52 am PDT #4803 of 10001
this mess was yours / now your mess is mine

I don't know if it's because I'm the one running the drabbles, but I keep getting blocked -- I didn't write a hands drabble or a knots drabble. But here's my attempt at the standing/lying down drabble....

****

I had no choice when I spent weeks lying flat on my stomach; it was the only position that didn't cause unbearable pain. Give me all the options, and I’d rather sit, stand, walk. But I couldn’t. Those were taken away from me.

Now, with the surgeon looming over me, I was still lying down, but this time it was my choice. Let him do this, cut me open, fix the broken bits, and put me back together, and I might just get everything back. I might be able to choose when I lie down, and when, like my surgeon, I get to stand, and perform miracles.


Connie Neil - May 26, 2004 5:31:46 am PDT #4804 of 10001
brillig

Teppy, that was neat.


Steph L. - May 26, 2004 5:40:09 am PDT #4805 of 10001
this mess was yours / now your mess is mine

Thanks -- I think I'm a little too Bob Like Carrots about my surgery, but I was totally blocked on what to write for this drabble, when it suddenly popped into my mind -- I was in that lying-down-with-*everyone*-standing situation for 6 weeks. Perfect drabble fodder.


Steph L. - May 26, 2004 5:53:07 am PDT #4806 of 10001
this mess was yours / now your mess is mine

And another....

****

"Give me 5 more minutes, and I'll have the oil filter changed for you," the voice drifted up from beneath the Honda.

"That’s...really fast, isn't it?"

"Not really. Well, I don't know, actually, anymore. I started changing the oil in my Dad's car when I was 14, and after 20 years, the process is completely ingrained."

"I didn't realize you were such a grease monkey."

"Oh, please! An oil change is nothing -- it's not like I'm rebuilding the transmission!"

"Can you do that?"

A pause, and then, "Well, yeah."

"You're just trying to impress me now, aren't you?"

In response, she slid out from under the car and grinned up at her boyfriend.


Connie Neil - May 26, 2004 5:55:10 am PDT #4807 of 10001
brillig

Ha!


Beverly - May 26, 2004 7:18:44 am PDT #4808 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

I never did do a Knots. I'll probably still do it later and just put it in my own LJ.

Who Stands, Who Lies?

She was so beautiful, her silhouette etched in dawnlight as she stood naked at the dirty window. His heart turned over in his chest, and though he knew she found such declarations distasteful, he was compelled to state the emotion he still felt for her, or burst. "I love you."

She felt his words, tiny barbed arrows against her psyche, and she didn't turn to see him lying in her bed, his face toward her as a flower toward the sun, yearning for her touch, her nearness, an answering softening toward him. "I love you too," she lied.


erikaj - May 26, 2004 7:21:46 am PDT #4809 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Tep, I liked both of yours. Beverly, that was hot. Of course, reading about linoleum makes me...well, never mind.


deborah grabien - May 26, 2004 11:53:49 am PDT #4810 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Brandy, half full. Scotch, the dregs of an old single malt; that one was hidden beneath some dirty clothes.

She limps around his house, stooping painfully on her injured legs. There's evidence of stupidity, of addiction, of self-destruction and need, all over the place, as if a man with multiple kidney transplants and a heroin habit needs hard alcohol on top of it.

Eventually she stops beside the bed, where he's curled up and shivering. She stands above him, brandishing the last bottle like a billyclub.

"Next one of these I find," she tells him, "I break over your skull."