River: They weren't cows inside. They were waiting to be, but they forgot. Now they see the sky and they remember what they are. Mal: Is it bad that what she said made perfect sense to me?

'Safe'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Pix - May 18, 2004 5:34:39 pm PDT #4728 of 10001
The status is NOT quo.

Deb-backflung, and off to bed for me. Late night last night.

Liese, you're so creative tonight! My brain is swimming in words. I like the guitar one especially. I played violin/viola more than 15 years, and I never had long nails. Music over beauty. It was an obvious choice for me too.


Liese S. - May 18, 2004 5:38:24 pm PDT #4729 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Liese, you're so creative tonight!

Heh. Thanks, but actually just catching up posting here too, and also having the Day of Work Avoidance. Got a good bit done, despite it.


Polter-Cow - May 18, 2004 5:47:22 pm PDT #4730 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Sorry I wasn't here, Deb, I was Gilmore Girlsing. I'm free to beta when you get back.


Ginger - May 18, 2004 5:47:57 pm PDT #4731 of 10001
"It didn't taste good. It tasted soooo horrible. It tasted like....a vodka martini." - Matilda

Deb, I can look at in the morning.


Hil R. - May 18, 2004 5:49:44 pm PDT #4732 of 10001
Sometimes I think I might just move up to Vermont, open a bookstore or a vegan restaurant. Adam Schlesinger, z''l

My knot drabble. I think I may edit it some tomorrow, since there are a few sentences I don't totally like, especially the last few, but I'm in a post-it-now mood.

“Ow!”

“If you’d just sit still it wouldn’t hurt!”

Liar. Combing my hair always hurt. Squirming gives me a bit of a break while she tries to focus my attention on the TV. I’d watch if it were cartoons, but tonight, mom chose the program, and there’s no way I’m going to sit there and watch China Beach while she tears all my hair out.

An hour later, it’s done. I go off to let the fire on my scalp die down, at least until morning, when it will be pulled again in a vain attempt to create neat pigtails.


dcp - May 18, 2004 6:20:34 pm PDT #4733 of 10001
The more I learn, the more I realize how little I know.

"Knots" has a different connotation for me than it does for most people, so I can't resist:

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A gentle surge upwards confirms the beeps from the glider's instrument panel, and a bank to the left starts the climb. Two knots up, slow beeps -- adjust the circle, tighten again. Five knots up, faster beeps -- that's better.

Ten minutes and twenty turns later, almost five thousand feet higher, ready to press on. Level out on course, drop the nose, push to cruising speed. The beeps change to the harsh clicks of sinking air. Push the nose down, drive through the sink. Ninety knots forward and ten down. Cover some distance.

Three more thermals like that will get me home.

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edited for nit-picks and word count


Liese S. - May 18, 2004 6:38:14 pm PDT #4734 of 10001
"Faded like the lilac, he thought."

Nice, dcp. I like that. I like the focus and the technicality, but how the last line brings it into the realm of the personal.


Beverly - May 18, 2004 7:31:21 pm PDT #4735 of 10001
Days shrink and grow cold, sunlight through leaves is my song. Winter is long.

Oh, I love the different take on "knots", dcp. Very nice.

I really enjoy all the places these drabbles come from, the widely differing POVs. And then we get some weeks where we all seem to be on a similar wavelength. Mine hasn't hit the surface yet, but it's bubbling.

Deb, send clowns, please. I'll read and respond in the morning.


Connie Neil - May 18, 2004 7:57:14 pm PDT #4736 of 10001
brillig

Ooo, "Jury of her Peers," what a kick-ass story.

An attempt at knots...

The men in my life keep trying to teach me knots. When I was six years old, Mark Tuttle finally taught me how to tie my shoes.

My father, maybe seeing in my eager interest the son he never had, taught me about tools and car engines and the uses of half-hitches and the proper way to tie a square knot.

Joe, as part of his tales of life in the Navy, grabbed some twine that was next to the bed and showed off knots I don't remember the names of.

Hubby has shown me the same knots over and over. He forgets and I never remember how to do them. When he's hurting I ask him to tell me stories of the Forest Service, and he remembers knots and when he was strong.


sj - May 18, 2004 8:07:29 pm PDT #4737 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

Sorry, I wasn't here earlier Deb. I would be happy to read any additions any time you want to send them.