I swear, one of these times, you're gonna wake up in a coma.

Cordelia ,'Showtime'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Connie Neil - Apr 27, 2004 4:26:29 am PDT #4227 of 10001
brillig

Gorgeous, liese, both of them.

My husband will go as long as seven seconds between breaths when he's sleeping. Yes, I've timed it.


deborah grabien - Apr 27, 2004 6:46:42 am PDT #4228 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Those are all fantastic. I really got a sensory slap off Plei's line about being curled like a pillbug - that evoked a stab of memory for me, all by itself.

Mine. Some of you will know who the piano player was:

She Comes in Colours

Everytime I hear music, something opens in me and then closes.

Violin, the plaintive mourning of bow against strings, and I'm abruptly a child again, listening to scratchy tapes of my father, before diabetes took his music from him. It's a voice, that fiddle, calling me through sleep and down paths of memory.

Piano, a rich cascade of blues, boogie, tickling up the ivories, and suddenly I'm twenty again. The piano music is poignant to the edge of pain. It brings the beloved dead, the man I lost, through heart and soul and nerve endings.

All my music is prismatic.


erikaj - Apr 27, 2004 6:50:06 am PDT #4229 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Wow...I'm not sure I'll come up with anything, which, in its way, is better than following that.


deborah grabien - Apr 27, 2004 6:55:19 am PDT #4230 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

But erika, you write beautifully about sense memory, damnit. Hell, I haven't beta'd a single piece of yours that didn't.


Polter-Cow - Apr 27, 2004 6:56:34 am PDT #4231 of 10001
What else besides ramen can you scoop? YOU CAN SCOOP THIS WORLD FROM DARKNESS!

Deborah, I bought Robertson Davies' Murther and Walking Spirits yesterday. Have you read it?


erikaj - Apr 27, 2004 7:01:00 am PDT #4232 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Thank you! But now I have to write one.(I hate when the wife puts me on the spot in front of people. :))


deborah grabien - Apr 27, 2004 7:02:11 am PDT #4233 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

PC, yup, and it's bloody brilliant (Davies may be the only writer out there who could pull it off properly), but we're in the wrong thread for that discussion: Great Write is strictly for original fiction. We need to take it over to Literary.


deborah grabien - Apr 27, 2004 7:03:03 am PDT #4234 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

(I hate when the wife puts me on the spot in front of people. :))

Snerk. "But honey, you make the best meat loaf..."


erikaj - Apr 27, 2004 7:07:19 am PDT #4235 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

Sigh. But this is the Last. Time. And you clean up.


deborah grabien - Apr 27, 2004 7:17:08 am PDT #4236 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Now, honey, you know I always do the dishes....