I like Demetrius too.
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Demetrius could work....
I like Benedick. To the non-Shakespearean folks, it conjurs up feelings of betrayal, a la Benedict Arnold. To me, it conjurs up pictures of Kenneth Branagh looking cute.
For the time period in question, and his social background?
I think, alas, that it's either Bertram or Sebastian. Which is a pity, really, considering all the other names, but who he is and where he comes from has to be taken into account, as well.
Between those, Sebastian is better, imo.
I like Sebastian.
I like Sebastian best as a name, though I could see Demetrius working. Bertram, to me, has a nerdy feel.
I like Sebastian too.
My only concern with Sebastian is that it may be too much of a hero name--a little too much with the sexy and dashing and not enough with the pompous arse-ness.
Bertram, to me, has a nerdy feel.
It really does, doesn't it? But in the era and social structure in which Susan's story is set - early 19th century England - I don't think they'd invented nerds.
Of course, the character is something of a control freak. Sebastian might work. And I do like Demetrius, but how likely would this character's mama have been to use it?
Edit: x-post with the author! Susan, I also think that, with his personality, Titus would work. Very autocratic name.