Thanks, dear. I've been mostly (brain-)dead all day, so catching this post is a serendipitous moment. Off to change tag...

I was thinking I sounded too mental now. And of course, Kay gives me her dictation sometimes...I'm not much like her but she'd be pissed offwith me for ignoring her, and I don't think I want that.

There, done. Sorry, I got distracted again in the middle. There's just no hope today.

But look! Pretty shiny new tagline. Thanks!

erika, if your mental processes are off, then so are mine. I do hear the dialogue in my head, in the appropriate voices. And hearing screaming matches in my head is not fun--generally because they're snarking so fast I can't get all the notes down.

Maybe the last one:

******

Better the devil you know, people say. But they don't take your route home from school.

The other side of the street torments you on an evening like this, taunts your memories. Has that headstone always tilted like that, or is the fog pushing it slowly over? Shouldn't the lights be stationary? They're just faraway kitchen windows, after all. Not bobbing, nor slowly winking. Not.

You cling, instead, to the featureless wall on your other side whose uneven mortar scratches your searching hand. You've never seen past the twisted metal decorations to see what's behind it. Tonight ignorance is bliss.

Excellent all around.

I love this whole commnity. And Teppy is brilliant.

Don't say last, ita, please.

Maybe I'll move this to my LJ later.

connie, I loved that post. Gave me the sense of all sorts of images and familiar-emotions (which are the only things I know how to read "through", if I'm making any sense).

I'm so glad I've subscribed to this thread for lurking - I love reading it.

One more for places.

You come out of the palais, along an endless hall lined with enormous mirrors, through a gallery where great painters commemorated French victories, never defeats. The steps at the back are broad, a gracious sweep of white marble. Odd to think that Marie Antoinette once came this way, tittupping on diamond-studded heels.

Across the gardens, you settle on a bench. Before you is a pool. Suddenly the surface breaks into gaping black holes: the mouths of fish, knowing it's tourist season, greedy for madeleines.

You throw them crumbs. Behind you, the sun drops low, touching avenues of chestnut and lime.

mmm, Versailles.