My whole life just flashed before my eyes! I gotta get me a life!

Xander ,'Dirty Girls'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Nilly - Apr 20, 2004 12:51:36 am PDT #4101 of 10001
Swouncing

OK, is anyone here capable of not writing a brilliant drabble in this week's theme?

t raises hand

But catching up here was absolutely wonderful. Such a wonderful read. And I tried to do something (that thing called work) in between each drabble, to clear my mind of the former one and get on with the following one with a clean slate. And, well, to prolong the reading as much as I could. Thanks, everybody. With special thanks for Teppy.

victor, I know I'm too late and you've already sent it, but I just wanted to say that I liked it that there was no explanation behind the not-giving-in-to-temptation - I felt it gave space enough for each reader to insert their own reasons (ethical or otherwise), it made it more general (I'm not sure that's the word I want), to me, at least.


Steph L. - Apr 20, 2004 4:08:00 am PDT #4102 of 10001
I look more rad than Lutheranism

And I think we're allowed to write three each for each weekly challenge, right?

As of right now, there's no real limit, because the number of people in the LJ community isn't as large as the numbers in the fanfic drabble communities. They have hundreds of members; if everyone posted more than 3, it would be overkill.

In our case, though -- there's no limit for the time being. Just try not to post, say, 50 drabbles.


Jesse - Apr 20, 2004 4:46:11 am PDT #4103 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

My god, these are all fantastic. And Nilly, you could too write one of these -- you might have to do more cutting down than some, but still. You're a terrific writer. I mean, shit, my stuff could not be any more prosaic, but I still kind of like it.


Astarte - Apr 20, 2004 5:35:16 am PDT #4104 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

Yep, Consuela, it's Galveston. I was thinking specifically of the 1900 hurricane.

I love that island. I'm overdue for a visit, but if I don't get there before Memorial Day, I'll have to wait till fall. It's too overcrowded and expensive during the summer.


Astarte - Apr 20, 2004 5:40:01 am PDT #4105 of 10001
Not having has never been the thing I've regretted most in my life. Not trying is.

Serial to add, Nilly, I would LOVE to see a drabble from you. I've not the slightest doubt it would amaze and delight.


Nilly - Apr 20, 2004 6:09:27 am PDT #4106 of 10001
Swouncing

Thanks, Jesse and Astarte (and I wasn't fishing for anything, honest). If it were Hebrew, I could probably try - write long and then cut and prune, the way I do whenever I have to write something for, well, anything - but I don't think that I can, not yet, in English.

There are just too many levels of translation there for me - and I don't even mean the getting of the initial idea (which is a huge thing for me, in fact, but this is exactly the kind of thing this exercise is supposed to help overcoming, right?): from what I think (Hebrew), to how I want to say it (defaulted Hebrew), to how I can do that in a different way than a one that is already not natural for me, with actually thinking about the phrasing of stuff in a conscious level for it to help get the meaning across.

I still don't have enough English for that. Not yet.


Deena - Apr 20, 2004 6:40:10 am PDT #4107 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Sunday Drive

Look over the edge of the narrow silver ribbon as you swing around the spiral, rocking as you curve, and curve. Look deep into red rocks, barred by sunlight, broken and scattered, down to the water, another silver ribbon a mile below, slipping through the rocks, around the trees made from faded green splatters and black lines. Everything moves, the ribbon of road, the water, the red rocks, spiralling inward with you, from the outside air above, down, into the red rocks going black, while the sun moves and scatters, goes red and gold before it slips below the horizon.


Katie M - Apr 20, 2004 6:40:48 am PDT #4108 of 10001
I was charmed (albeit somewhat perplexed) by the fannish sensibility of many of the music choices -- it's like the director was trying to vid Canada. --loligo on the Olympic Opening Ceremonies

Oh, are you a write-long person? I'm going to be a write-long person in my next life. It's going to be great. Next time around, college will not be a process of looking at a two-page paper thinking "er, yeah, that's my point. I don't have eight more pages to say about that."

Drabbling is seriously the only situation in which I've ever wanted more room.


Jesse - Apr 20, 2004 6:45:45 am PDT #4109 of 10001
Sometimes I trip on how happy we could be.

My drabble first drafts are all 75 words, I shit you not.


§ ita § - Apr 20, 2004 6:54:32 am PDT #4110 of 10001
Well not canonically, no, but this is transformative fiction.

I hit 80 odd, say "Is this enough? No?" and then add 30 words and work down from there, pretty consistently.

I'm so terribly short form.