Can't even shout, Can't even cry. The Gentlemen are coming by. Looking in windows, knocking on doors. They need to take seven, and they might take yours. Can't call to mom, can't say a word. You're gonna die screaming but you won't be heard.

Dream Girl ,'Bring On The Night'


The Great Write Way  

A place for Buffistas to discuss, beta and otherwise deal and dish on their non-fan fiction projects.


Nilly - Apr 01, 2004 12:44:30 pm PST #3889 of 10001
Swouncing

I think they want us to talk about faith in our lives (in my case, it would be while growing up, the half of my family that was Jewish), how it affects our work (none of us are writing about Jewish themes, so I have no idea how this pans out), what we've run into because of it one way or another.

Thanks, deb - that reads really interesting.


deborah grabien - Apr 01, 2004 3:44:31 pm PST #3890 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Deena, now I'm curious to see Brynn's original short piece. I only saw the longer one, which worked perfectly - a very organic feel to the progression.


deborah grabien - Apr 01, 2004 3:45:58 pm PST #3891 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Deena, now I'm curious to see Brynn's original short piece. I only saw the longer one, which worked perfectly - a very organic feel to the progression.

edit: Nilly, it's in early December, and they're projecting 2,000 people showing up; it's the opening of the new Centre, which has a huge list of moneyed donors, all of whom read. I'm expecting major fun, and the timing is perfect, because Famous Flower of Serving Men will have been out for about five weeks.


Brynn - Apr 01, 2004 4:36:07 pm PST #3892 of 10001
"I'd rather discuss the permutations of swordplay, with an undertone of definite allusion to sex." Beverly, offering an example of when your characters give you 'tude.

Thanks sj. I received your email as well. Deb, if you're really interested I probably have a copy of it kicking around my computer somewhere. Actually, going over the story today I noticed a logic flaw. The store's been rearranged yet the character seems to know where everything is. Whoops. Easily fixed with a quick reference though.


Deena - Apr 01, 2004 5:26:11 pm PST #3893 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara

Oh, I assumed it had been recently rearranged, but not so recently that she hadn't picked up where things were. I worked as a checker in a grocery store. Once you got the logic, it didn't seem that hard to figure out where things had gone.

I never keep stuff after I beta it. I don't want to make the mistake of thinking it's mine 5 years down the road. I hope you do have a copy, Brynn. It would be a good thing to keep, imo.

Deb, that reading sounds more and more intriguing all the time. That's a lot of people in attendance.


deborah grabien - Apr 01, 2004 6:08:12 pm PST #3894 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

Oh, I assumed it had been recently rearranged, but not so recently that she hadn't picked up where things were.

So had I; it's the sort of thing the staff always does seem to know.


Brynn - Apr 01, 2004 6:35:04 pm PST #3895 of 10001
"I'd rather discuss the permutations of swordplay, with an undertone of definite allusion to sex." Beverly, offering an example of when your characters give you 'tude.

Hmm. so it's not a logic problem then?


sj - Apr 01, 2004 6:37:43 pm PST #3896 of 10001
"There are few hours in life more agreeable than the hour dedicated to the ceremony known as afternoon tea."

Hmm. so it's not a logic problem then?

I don't know. I didn't think of it when I read the story, but when I was working at the bookstore they kept moving things and it took me a while not to want to immediately go to where things used to be.


erikaj - Apr 03, 2004 8:42:08 am PST #3897 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!

I talked to the editor at Mouth last night. Good conversation, full of extolling of my virtues(/Lorne) She said I should read this book called "Writing Without Teachers" and if I did I'd never get writer's block again. Which feels like a big "Nuh and uh" from here but what do y'all think? Has anyone here read it?


deborah grabien - Apr 03, 2004 8:43:53 am PST #3898 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.

I'm totally the wrong person to ask, love. I've never read any books on how to write - I know there are a couple that are really popular and useful to a lot of people, though.