(psst, erika, don't believe Nilly. She gave me such a set of incredible betas that I told Ayelet Waldman to be jealous of me because of it.)
I've seen honest faces before. They usually come attached to liars.
Willow ,'Conversations with Dead People'
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deborah grabien - Jan 20, 2004 7:47:47 am PST #3232 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
erikaj - Jan 20, 2004 7:55:45 am PST #3233 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
That's great, Nilly. And I'm still totally thrilled by the (groping) hands across the water thing we have going here...my dumb little story's going to Israel and I can sit here in my socks. Cool.ETA, insent to everyone that asked...now I'm thinking you'll be able to see every flaw, and that it's all embarrassing.(in a different way than my crossovers.)
deborah grabien - Jan 20, 2004 11:17:24 am PST #3234 of 10001
It really doesn't matter. It's just an opinion. Don't worry about it. Not worth the hassle.
erika, insent, with "track changes" turned on.
erikaj - Jan 20, 2004 11:45:11 am PST #3235 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
I'm embarrassed to have sent such a rough draft. But I didn't know I was. I'll bet that is a year old or something...I remembered it being more finished.
Deena - Jan 20, 2004 11:46:57 am PST #3236 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
Erika, I know the feeling... something I got immediately after one of your e-mails to me, as I recall *g*.
erikaj - Jan 20, 2004 12:04:39 pm PST #3237 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
Yeah, I guess. I tend to grade 'em in terms of how long I spent. Which really doesn't mean anything if you're not looking for/at the right things. I get too close too fast, and get so I can't see it outside of what I put in. And just cause I picture it, doesn't mean I put the reader there, exactly.Although maybe my contribution to letters is teaching Deena Fisher what a "skel' is.
Deena - Jan 20, 2004 12:42:32 pm PST #3238 of 10001
How are you me? You need to stop that. Only I can be me. ~Kara
I was actually thinking of burnt out cops there, but skels seemed so appropriate. You have most definitely contributed, but I've also read your writing. It's not the only contribution.
erikaj - Jan 20, 2004 1:25:23 pm PST #3239 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
there's a slang word for that, too, which is on the tip of my tongue, but I guess it's not cool like "eyefuck" so I don't remember.
Nilly - Jan 22, 2004 6:11:33 am PST #3240 of 10001
Swouncing
erike, a (sorry, belated) insent.
And deb made me blush.
erikaj - Jan 22, 2004 6:23:10 am PST #3241 of 10001
Always Anti-fascist!
I got it, Nilly. I just need to think about what to say back...you are such a genius. If I wrote Hebrew, (Which I, you know, don't. Despite my bogus Yiddish) I'm sure I'd write like Tonto. (Do you know who Tonto is? Well, anyway, he talks in fragments like "We go.")